Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 발음 중복과 문장 구성의 혼란을 줄이고, 핵심 문장을 먼저 말한 뒤 간단한 이유와 구체적 예를 덧붙이세요. 또한 'because' 뒤에는 명확한 이유를 한 가지로 제시하고, 문장 수는 3문장 이내로 유지하세요. 예: 주제 문장 → 이유 → 구체적 예 순으로 말합니다.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate better. For example, when I take notes by hand in lectures, I stay focused and remember key points longer. Because of this, I often choose a notebook over a laptop for studying.

Sugestão: 말을 시작할 때 불필요한 음절(uh, repetitions)을 줄이고, 직설적으로 빈도와 이유를 말하세요. 연결어를 사용해 이유를 명확히 제시하고 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 유지하세요. 예: 주제 문장 → 이유(현재 상황) → 간단한 추가 정보.

Exemplo: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day, but recently I have been using a laptop much more. I'm preparing to secure a job, so I spend longer hours at my desk typing documents and emails.

Sugestão: 문장을 간결히 하되 구체적인 시기(예: 초등학교 몇 학년 또는 나이)를 추정해 말하고, 이유와 상황을 명확히 연결하세요. 불완전한 문장을 피하고, 연결어로 흐름을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

Exemplo: I can't remember the exact date, but I learned to type when I was in elementary school. During a summer vacation assignment, I had to send an email to my teacher, so I started practising typing then.

Sugestão: 중복 표현을 피하고, 구체적인 방법과 개인 경험을 더 상세히 설명하세요(예: 프로그램 이름, 연습 빈도, 성과). 연결어를 사용해 이유와 결과를 제시하면 자연스럽습니다.

Exemplo: In my country there's a well-known typing program called [Program Name], and I practised with it regularly. I used it for 20 minutes a day for a few months, which noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× I I prefer handwriting because although it takes some more time to to not taking but by by doing that I can't remember the contents for long for longer. But the most important thing is I have to concentrate.

✓ I prefer handwriting because although it takes a little more time and I do not write as quickly, by doing that I can remember the contents for longer. The most important thing is that I can concentrate.

The original sentence has redundant words and incorrect pronoun/verb forms ('not taking' is incorrect in this context). Replace 'not taking' with 'I do not write as quickly' to clarify. Remove duplicate words and adjust 'for long' to 'for longer'. Add 'that' for a clearer clause. Improve cohesion by splitting into two sentences. Grammar types addressed: Incorrect use of pronouns (12), Verb + -ing form (8), Sentence structure errors (26).

× Uh, no I don't but but these days is the frequency is pretty big much more because I'm pre I'm preparing to secure my job so I spend more time on the desk and is using keyboard or.

✓ No, I don't. But these days I type much more often because I'm preparing to secure my job, so I spend more time at my desk using the keyboard.

The original has word order and auxiliary errors ('is the frequency is pretty big much more' is ungrammatical). Use 'type much more often' to express increased frequency. Change 'on the desk' to 'at my desk' and remove extraneous 'is'. Ensure modal/auxiliary forms are correct by using simple present for habitual actions and present continuous for ongoing preparation. Grammar types addressed: Incorrect use of prepositions (11), Sentence structure errors (26), Incorrect adverb placement (20).

× I can't remember the specific date that I started to type on the keyboard, but I think it was when I was elementary school because there was a homework during the vacation that I have to send an e-mail to the to my.

✓ I can't remember the specific date I started typing on the keyboard, but I think it was when I was in elementary school because there was homework during the vacation that required me to send an e-mail.

Use 'started typing' (verb + -ing) instead of 'started to type' for natural phrasing and correct 'was elementary school' to 'was in elementary school'. Change 'there was a homework' to 'there was homework' (article error) and 'that I have to send' to past 'that required me to send' to match past context. Grammar types addressed: Verb + -ing form (8), Article errors (22), Past tense issue (5), Incorrect use of prepositions (11).

× In my country there is a famous computer program that helps people to improve typing. So I I did practice with this with the program as well and I bet most of the Koreans learn and improve their typing skills.

✓ In my country there is a famous computer program that helps people improve their typing. I practiced with this program as well, and I think most Koreans learn and improve their typing skills.

Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' ('helps people improve' is correct). Use simple past 'practiced' for a completed action. Replace 'I bet' with 'I think' for a more appropriate register. Remove 'the' before 'Koreans' when speaking generally. Grammar types addressed: Incorrect use of infinitive (related to 8), Past tense issue (5), Article errors (22), Incorrect use of pronouns (12).