Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I before handwriting because I can practice my English writings skills and the penmanship of my words. It can improve my thinking.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
No, I'm not usually use desktop or laptop because nowadays we can use mobile phone so I can only use one finger to control order letters.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned to type on the keyboard was in my school time about 20 years ago. We have to learn the accounting or bookkeeping, so we also need to learn.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Improve my typing. Is counting the time and put the right finger on the right keys so we don't have to look at the keys just looking at.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 52.0Sugestão: 回答要直接且语法正确。你的回答应以一句主题句开始,清楚地表明偏好,然后用1–2句具体原因或例子支持。注意语法(如“I prefer”而非“I before”),使用单数/复数和冠词,并避免冗长。可以补充具体情景说明为何写作有帮助。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me practice my English writing and improve my handwriting. For example, when I write essays by hand, I notice mistakes more easily and remember vocabulary better, which improves my thinking and language skills.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 44.0Sugestão: 回答要更简洁且语法正确。先直接回答(Yes/No),然后用1–2句具体说明原因和频率。注意时态和词序(例如“I don't usually use a desktop or laptop”),并解释用手机的具体影响(如速度、准确性)。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually use a desktop or laptop. Nowadays I mostly use my smartphone, so I often type with one finger, which is slower and makes more typos than using a proper keyboard.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答应以简洁的时间点开始并给出具体背景。修正语法(例如“I learned to type about 20 years ago at school”),并说明学习原因或课程内容以增加细节和连贯性。
Exemplo: I learned to type about 20 years ago when I was at school. It was part of our accounting and bookkeeping lessons, so we practiced typing to enter financial data quickly and accurately.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答要有完整句子并使用连词使表达更连贯。先给出方法摘要,然后用1–2句具体说明如何练习(例如计时练习、正确手指放置、盲打练习)。注意语法和词序,例如“timed practice”而不是“counting the time”。
Exemplo: I improve my typing through timed practice and correct finger placement. For instance, I use online typing tests to time myself and focus on touch-typing so I don't need to look at the keys.
× I before handwriting because I can practice my English writings skills and the penmanship of my words. It can improve my thinking.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I can practice my English writing skills and the penmanship of my words. It also improves my thinking.
问题类型:代词/词语使用不当并伴有动词形式错误。 原因与建议: 1) “I before handwriting” 中单词错误,应为动词 prefer(偏好);句首需要主语+动词结构,改为 I prefer handwriting。 2) “writings skills” 中复数名词写法错误,正确为 writing skills(writing 作名词/动名词修饰 skills)。 3) “It can improve my thinking.” 用法可以但更自然连贯用现在时一般陈述:It also improves my thinking. 建议多用简单现在时表达常态事实。 改进建议:注意动词选择(prefer 而非 before),名词和动名词的正确形式,句子连接可用 also 更流畅。
× No, I'm not usually use desktop or laptop because nowadays we can use mobile phone so I can only use one finger to control order letters.
✓ No, I don't usually use a desktop or laptop because nowadays we can use mobile phones, so I can only use one finger to type the letters.
问题类型:第三人称单数/动词形式与冠词使用不当。 原因与建议: 1) “I'm not usually use” 结构错误,应使用一般现在时否定:I don't usually use。 2) “desktop or laptop” 前应加不定冠词 a desktop or a laptop(泛指单台设备),改为 a desktop or laptop 亦可。 3) “mobile phone” 建议复数或加冠词:mobile phones 更通用。 4) “control order letters” 用词不当,应该说 type the letters(打字)或 type letters。 改进建议:掌握一般现在时否定形式(do/does + not + 动词原形),注意冠词和常用短语(type letters)。
× I learned to type on the keyboard was in my school time about 20 years ago. We have to learn the accounting or bookkeeping, so we also need to learn.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was at school, about 20 years ago. We had to learn accounting or bookkeeping, so we also needed to learn typing.
问题类型:过去时使用错误与句子结构混乱。 原因与建议: 1) 原句“I learned to type on the keyboard was in my school time” 结构不正确,应用时间状语从句或短语:I learned to type when I was at school。 2) 时间“about 20 years ago” 放在句中或句末都可,用过去时表过去事实。 3) 第二句“We have to learn” 需用过去时对应“about 20 years ago”:We had to learn;同理“so we also need to learn” 改为 so we also needed to learn typing(明示学会打字)。 改进建议:叙述过去事件时保持全句过去时一致,使用清晰的时间状语(when I was at school / about 20 years ago)。
× Improve my typing. Is counting the time and put the right finger on the right keys so we don't have to look at the keys just looking at.
✓ To improve my typing, I time myself and put the right fingers on the right keys so we don't have to look at the keyboard.
问题类型:句子结构错误与动词形式不一致。 原因与建议: 1) 原句“Improve my typing.” 不是完整句子,应补全主语和动词:To improve my typing, I ... 或 I improve my typing by ...。 2) “Is counting the time and put the right finger” 语法混乱,应保持平行结构:I time myself and put the right fingers on the right keys。 3) “just looking at.” 不完整且不自然,改为 so we don't have to look at the keyboard(阐明目的)。 改进建议:写作时保证句子有主语和谓语,使用并列动词时保持形式一致(time myself 和 put),并明确句子结尾的信息。