Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use correct grammar and avoid vague phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct comparative form and explain one or two specific reasons using linking words. For example, say whether you prefer handwriting and then give a clear reason and a short consequence.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For instance, when I take notes by hand I process ideas more deeply, so I retain facts longer.

Sugestão: Be concise and use natural phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then give specific details and link them logically. Correct awkward negatives (say “either” not “both” in this context) and avoid repeating 'I use my phone' twice.

Exemplo: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop because I don't own either. Instead, I type on my smartphone every day to message friends and email universities, so most of my written communication happens on my phone.

Sugestão: Give a clear timeline and avoid vague or broken sentences. Use simple past or present perfect correctly to show when you started and when you improved. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail with linking words.

Exemplo: I started learning basic typing in grade one during our computer lessons. However, I became much more confident after a few years of practice, and now I can type comfortably and accurately.

Sugestão: Be specific about methods and use consistent verb tense. Start with a clear statement of what you do now, then list concrete activities using linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'. Avoid filler like 'I guess'.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing exercises and timed tests. For example, I spend 20 minutes on a typing website, watch tutorial videos to correct my posture and finger placement, and type emails and essays to build speed and accuracy.

× I like handwriting because I guess it is more faster and it makes your hand to exercise about.

✓ I like handwriting because I guess it is faster and it exercises your hand.

Use of comparative 'more faster' is incorrect because 'faster' is already the comparative form of 'fast' (error type 13). Also 'it makes your hand to exercise about' has incorrect structure; use a simple active verb 'it exercises your hand' for clarity. Suggestion: remove 'more' before a comparative adjective and use correct verb structure (subject + verb + object).

× No, I don't type on both of them because I don't have them. But I do type on my phone. I chat with my friends, I talk with different universities. I use my phone for typing.

✓ No, I don't type on either of them because I don't have one. I do type on my phone. I chat with my friends and communicate with different universities. I use my phone for typing.

'Both' is incorrect when denying two items; 'either' should be used in negative sentences (error type 12). 'Them' is plural while 'desktop or laptop' are singular choices; better to say 'one'. Also 'I talk with different universities' is awkward; use 'communicate with' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'either' in negative contexts and match singular/plural pronouns to the nouns referred to.

× We used to have a computer class when we were a grade one student, so I started at that time, but I came to a clear typing or understanding how to type perfectly in a very few years or you can see currently before.

✓ We used to have a computer class when I was in grade one, so I started then, and I became clearer about typing after a few years.

Multiple issues: mismatch of subject 'we' with 'a grade one student' and awkward phrasing 'I came to a clear typing' (error type 26). Replace 'we were a grade one student' with 'I was in grade one'. 'I came to a clear typing' is ungrammatical; use 'I became clearer about typing' or 'I learned to type more accurately'. 'in a very few years' should be 'after a few years'. Suggestion: simplify sentence, ensure subject agreement, and use natural English phrasing.

× I guess I improved or I will improve more typing by practicing daily and doing other jobs that is related to typing and by watching different videos about typing and related to that.

✓ I think I have improved and will improve my typing by practicing daily, doing other tasks related to typing, and watching videos about typing.

Tense and agreement problems: mixing 'I guess I improved or I will improve' is unclear (error type 6). Use present perfect 'have improved' to indicate improvement up to now and 'will improve' for future intention. 'Doing other jobs that is related' has subject-verb disagreement; use 'tasks that are related' or better 'other tasks related to typing'. Suggestion: separate past improvement (have improved) from future intention (will improve), ensure subject-verb agreement, and use concise nouns like 'tasks' and 'videos'.