Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a reason. Avoid repetition and incorrect forms (e.g. 'texting to my friend' → 'text my friends'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient. For example, I usually type on my mobile phone to send quick messages to my friends, which saves time and is easier to edit.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then one clear supporting detail. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Remove meaningless words like 'get reborn' and finish your ideas. Use linking words such as 'so' or 'because' to connect reasons.

Exemplo: I don't use a desktop or laptop daily; I mainly type on my mobile phone. Because I don't own a laptop, I text friends and handle short emails on my phone, especially when I'm out.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear time reference and one specific detail about learning. Avoid contradictory statements (faster/slowly) and incorrect grammar. Use linking phrases like 'since then' or 'over time' to show development.

Exemplo: I learned to type in the 12th grade when I practiced Hindi typing on a keyboard. Since then my speed has improved a lot because I practice daily by sending messages and doing small typing exercises.

Sugestão: Give a clear method you use to improve typing and one specific example. Avoid negative/confusing starts like 'I can't improve'. Use linking words such as 'by' or 'through' to describe actions.

Exemplo: I improved my typing mainly by practice. For example, I type messages and short emails every day and sometimes use free online typing tests to track and increase my speed.

× I always use typing on my mobile phone.

✓ I always type on my mobile phone.

The original uses 'use typing' which is incorrect; 'typing' is a verb form and should be used directly as 'type'. Use simple present 'type' to describe habitual action.

× I do, sometimes I send them messages and texting to my friend.

✓ Sometimes I send messages and text my friend.

Mixes auxiliary 'do' with awkward gerund 'texting'. Use parallel verbs: 'send' and 'text' in simple present for habitual actions. Remove unnecessary 'them' and 'to'.

× Oh I don't have a laptop but I mostly use my mobile phone and then every day I always text messages to my friend and I always prefer to get reborn and to texting them with others.

✓ I don't have a laptop, so I mostly use my mobile phone. Every day I text my friend and prefer to text others as well.

Run-on sentence with incorrect verb forms 'to texting' and awkward phrase 'get reborn'. Correct subject-verb flow and use infinitive or base form 'text'. Break into shorter sentences and remove unclear expression.

× Sometimes I send the important means, then I always use the.

✓ Sometimes I send important messages, and I always use my phone for that.

'Means' is wrong word choice; likely 'messages'. Sentence fragment 'I always use the.' lacks object. Use 'phone' and complete the clause. Use simple present for habitual actions.

× Well, I remember when I was in 12th class and I learned Hindi typing on a keyboard and then sometimes I have a lot of faster type slowly according to their time that I have a time.

✓ Well, I remember when I was in 12th grade I learned Hindi typing on a keyboard, and at first I typed slowly, but over time I became much faster.

Tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing: mix of present and past. Use past 'learned' and 'typed' for past events, then 'became' to show change. Replace unclear phrases with 'over time'.

× My power typing speed is so fast now a time I am the text messaging in a few seconds.

✓ My typing speed is much faster now; I can send text messages in a few seconds.

Awkward noun phrase 'power typing speed' and incorrect present continuous 'I am the text messaging'. Use simple present 'is' to describe current state and modal 'can' to express ability. Use clear object 'text messages'.

× I can't improve my writing on my on my mobile phone.

✓ I can't improve my writing on my mobile phone.

Duplication 'on my on my' is a typographical error. Remove duplicate. Sentence otherwise grammatically acceptable but could be rephrased to 'I can't improve my handwriting on my mobile phone' depending on meaning.

× I remember when I was in college that I by typing speed is slow, but according to the time my speed is fast because I always use it typing to send the message to someone.

✓ I remember when I was in college my typing speed was slow, but over time my speed improved because I used it often to send messages to people.

Tense errors and word order issues: mix of present and past. Use past 'was' for past state and 'improved' to show change. Replace 'according to the time' with 'over time' and use 'used it often' for habitual past action.