Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar and vocabulary. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, fix tense and article errors, and give one specific reason with an example. Use linking words (for example, however) to contrast handwriting.

Exemplo: I prefer typing. As a computer science graduate, I'm very familiar with the keyboard and can type much faster than I can write by hand. For example, when taking lecture notes I can capture more details and organize them quickly on my laptop. However, I sometimes use handwriting for quick sketches or personal notes.

Sugestão: Structure the response with one clear topic sentence and avoid repeating phrases. Combine sentences using linking words and correct subject-verb agreement. Provide a specific routine or frequency to enrich content.

Exemplo: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard almost every day, mainly for programming, because I work as a software developer. When I'm coding I prefer the laptop for its full keyboard and screen, but I also use my phone frequently for quick messages on social media or checking emails.

Sugestão: Give a concise time statement and complete the explanation. Fix grammar (e.g., "to write things", "because of my passion") and avoid trailing off. Mention a specific age or year and a clear method you used to learn.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in GSS 3, around age nine. After that I attended a computer school to become familiar with computers because I've always been passionate about technology. Since then I've practiced regularly to improve my speed.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence describing your main method, then give specific tools and frequency. Correct phrasing and reduce redundancy. Use linking words to show cause and effect (for example, therefore, so).

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice using apps like Mavis Beacon, which offers structured drills and games to build speed and accuracy. For example, I practice on the app for 20–30 minutes most evenings, and I also type messages on my phone and code on my laptop, which helps reinforce my skills.

× I will say typing.

✓ I would say typing.

The speaker is giving a preference in the present, not making a future prediction. Using 'will' suggests future action; 'would' or 'I prefer' is more natural for stating preferences. Suggestion: use 'I would say typing' or 'I prefer typing.'

× This is because I'm a computer science graduate.

✓ This is because I am a computer science graduate.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity in a corrected transcript use the full form 'I am'. The sentence structure is fine, change is stylistic. Suggestion: use 'I am' in formal speaking.

× I am very familiar with the keyboard so I can type very very fast.

✓ I am very familiar with the keyboard, so I can type very fast.

Repeated 'very' is stylistic redundancy; also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so'. Suggestion: remove duplicate 'very' and punctuate properly.

× As a result I enjoy typing a lot.

✓ As a result, I enjoy typing a lot.

Add a comma after the introductory phrase 'As a result' for correct punctuation. Structure is otherwise correct.

× But the handwriting on the other hand, it is slower and make keeping notes way other than typing.

✓ But handwriting, on the other hand, is slower and makes keeping notes more difficult than typing.

Problems: redundant pronoun 'it' after the subject and incorrect verb form 'make' (subject-verb agreement) and awkward phrase 'way other than'. Corrected by removing redundant 'it', using singular verb 'makes' to agree with 'handwriting', and replacing 'way other than' with 'more difficult than'. Suggestion: ensure subject is not repeated and verbs agree with the subject; use clear comparative phrasing.

× Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard almost every day, especially when I am writing a program.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard almost every day, especially when I am writing programs.

Consistency: 'a program' is singular but the activity is habitual; plural 'programs' fits habitual action. Alternatively keep 'a program' if referring to a single instance. Suggestion: use plural for habitual actions.

× Because I'm a software developer, I do write code.

✓ Because I'm a software developer, I write code.

Using 'do write' is unnecessary emphatic present tense here. Simple present 'write' is more natural. Suggestion: remove unnecessary auxiliary unless stressing contrast.

× So while writing a program I tend to make use of my of my laptop to type.

✓ So while writing a program I tend to make use of my laptop to type.

Phrase contains duplicated words 'my of my'. Remove the extra words to correct pronoun phrase. Suggestion: proofread for accidental repetition.

× And on the other hand I make use of phone a lot because anytime I'm on the social media trying to talk to a friend, I tends to use phone.

✓ On the other hand, I use my phone a lot because whenever I'm on social media trying to talk to a friend, I tend to use the phone.

Multiple issues: missing article 'my' before 'phone', incorrect adverb 'anytime' better as 'whenever', 'the social media' is incorrect — use 'social media', subject-verb agreement 'I tends' should be 'I tend', and article use before 'phone'. Also remove the starting conjunction 'And' or place comma. Suggestion: include possessive 'my', fix verb agreement, and use 'whenever' and 'social media'.

× I started learning how to use a keyboard for write things when I was in GSS 3 because after my GSS 3 I went to a computer school just to get myself familiar with computer because I have passion for anything that has to do with computer.

✓ I started learning how to use a keyboard to write things when I was in GSS 3, because after GSS 3 I went to a computer school to get familiar with computers since I have a passion for anything to do with computers.

Errors fixed: 'for write things' should be 'to write things' (infinitive), remove repeated 'my' before 'GSS 3' if style prefers, 'get myself familiar with computer' should be 'get familiar with computers', and add articles 'a passion' and plural 'computers'. Tenses are past, so keep past forms. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to write', correct prepositions, include articles, and pluralize where appropriate.

× So since then I have been trying to improve my typing speed but now with the help of.

✓ Since then I have been trying to improve my typing speed, and now I have improved with the help of practice.

Original sentence is incomplete ('with the help of.' with no object). Completed sentence by adding a clear object and maintaining present perfect continuous context. Suggestion: always finish clauses that introduce 'with the help of' by specifying what helped (e.g., 'practice' or a named program).

× I improve my typing personally because even going through a computer school, we are not being taught how to use a computer faster there we are just given idea on what to do.

✓ I improve my typing on my own because even after going through computer school, we were not taught how to use a computer faster; we were just given an idea of what to do.

Problems: 'personally' awkward, use 'on my own'. Tense consistency: 'going through' conflicts with past 'we were not taught' — change to past 'after going through' or 'after attending'. 'we are not being taught' should be past 'we were not taught'. Missing articles: 'an idea'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense and include articles.

× So with the help of Marvin's Beacon, I play a lot of games on the application and I type a lot.

✓ With the help of Mavis Beacon, I play a lot of games on the application and I type a lot.

Proper noun likely 'Mavis Beacon' not 'Marvin's Beacon'. 'on the application' is acceptable but 'in the application' or 'on the app' is more natural. Suggestion: correct program name and prefer 'in the application' or 'on the app'.

× I make use of my phone also, so it makes me very familiar with the keyboard.

✓ I also use my phone, so it makes me very familiar with the keyboard.

Stylistic improvement: 'make use of' is wordy; 'use' is simpler. Move 'also' to natural position. Suggestion: prefer concise verbs and natural adverb placement.