Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fragments, correct grammar and use linking words to expand briefly. Mention specific reasons and one short example. For instance, say you prefer handwriting because it reduces eye strain and helps memory, then give a short example.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it causes less eye strain and feels more comfortable for my hand. Additionally, writing by hand helps me remember information better, for example when I take notes in class I retain ideas more easily than if I type them.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use a linking phrase to explain. Include a short detail about what you use the phone for to make the answer more specific.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually type on a laptop; I mostly use my smartphone keyboard every day. For example, I send messages, write notes and reply to emails on my phone, so I get a lot of practice typing on that device.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct time reference and a brief sequence of events. Reduce fillers (ums, repeated words) and use linking words like 'when' or 'after' to make it coherent. Provide one specific activity you did when learning.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about eight years old. After school I attended a computer class where the teacher showed us basic typing and we practiced by creating an email account and sending messages.

Sugestão: Answer in present or past consistently, avoid repetition, and use linking words to explain methods. Be specific about the programs or practices you used and mention frequency or results to show improvement.

Exemplo: I improved my typing in elementary school by practicing regularly with a typing program that taught proper finger placement and speed exercises. I used that program for about 30 minutes a day until my accuracy and speed improved noticeably.

× I prefer handwriting because.

✓ I prefer handwriting.

The original sentence ends with 'because' but does not complete the subordinate clause, creating a sentence structure error. Remove the trailing 'because' or add a full clause (for example, 'because it is more comfortable') to complete the thought. Use a complete clause after 'because.'

× I don't like watch screen because it hurts my sight and hand.

✓ I don't like watching screens because they hurt my eyes and my hands.

Errors: 'watch screen' is incorrect verb+noun form; use the gerund 'watching' after 'like.' 'Screen' should be plural 'screens' when speaking generally. Pronoun/number and word choice: use plural 'they' to refer to screens. 'Sight' is better as 'eyes' and 'hand' as 'hands.' Suggestion: use 'watching screens' and plural nouns for general statements.

× Hand writes on paper is better to see.

✓ Writing by hand on paper is easier to see.

Original word order 'Hand writes on paper' is ungrammatical. Use the gerund noun 'writing' and the prepositional phrase 'by hand.' 'Better to see' is improved to 'easier to see' for natural English. Ensure correct noun phrase order: 'Writing by hand on paper.'

× No, I don't type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't usually use a laptop, but I always use a smartphone.

✓ No, I don't type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't usually use a laptop, but I always use a smartphone keyboard.

The original is mostly correct grammatically; however, to answer the question about typing, clarify 'smartphone keyboard.' Maintain subject-verb agreement; 'don't' is appropriate for 'I.' This correction focuses on clarity rather than a strict grammatical error.

× So I I type on my smartphone keyboard every day.

✓ So I type on my smartphone keyboard every day.

Repeated 'I' is a fluency/disfluency error; remove the duplicate. Present simple 'type' is correct for habitual action. Ensure only one subject pronoun appears.

× I think that that was umm 8 years old.

✓ I think I was about eight years old then.

Use 'I was' with an age (past tense) and include 'about' for approximation. 'That that' is repeated; remove duplication. The structure 'was 8 years old' requires the subject 'I.'

× Umm in in my after school I learned first a computer and that.

✓ After school, I first learned about computers.

Remove duplicate 'in.' 'In my after school' is incorrect; use 'After school.' 'Learned first a computer' is ungrammatical—use 'first learned about computers' or 'first learned to use a computer.' Place adverbs ('first') before verbs appropriately.

× In the class I made a e-mail.

✓ In class, I created an email account.

'Made a e-mail' is unnatural; use 'created an email' or 'sent an email.' 'In the class' should be 'In class' when speaking generally. Use article 'an' before 'email.'

× When I was in elementary school, I learned computer typing and I really practice hard the time umm, by using a program typing program.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I learned to type on the computer and practiced hard using a typing program.

Use past tense consistently: 'learned' and 'practiced.' Use infinitive 'learned to type' or 'learned computer typing.' Remove redundancy 'program typing program.' Place 'using a typing program' after the verb. 'Practice' should be past 'practiced' to match 'when I was.'

× Yes, I really practiced.

✓ Yes, I really practiced.

This sentence is already correct in past tense and matches the context. No grammatical change needed.