Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., ‘prefer typing’ → ‘I prefer typing to handwriting’).

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I use my laptop and phone daily to do homework and message friends, and typing makes writing long passages much quicker.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then support it with clear reasons and avoid hesitations/questions within your response. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly and choose the correct tense and pronouns.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop rather than a desktop because it's portable. Since I attend college, I can easily take my laptop to classes and study spaces, so it suits my lifestyle.

Sugestão: Start with a precise time reference and then give specific details about the lessons or tools used. Correct grammar and choose precise words (e.g., 'improve' instead of 'accurate'). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to type at school when I was about 10 years old. We had computer classes that used typing software to practice accuracy and speed, which helped me improve my skills.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear method with details and linking words. Avoid vague phrasing and grammar errors. Explain a specific practice routine or tool you use and the result it gives you.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly on my phone and laptop. For instance, I use typing apps and chat frequently to reinforce key positions, and I also do short daily exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing more than handwriting because it's convenient for me to type because I'm a computer person and I use laptop or computer or phone in my daily life just to do my homework, chat with my friends and if I need to write a long passage, I can easily type it.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it's convenient for me; I use a laptop, computer, or phone daily to do my homework, chat with my friends, and to write long passages I can easily type them.

This sentence has redundant conjunctions ('because' used twice) and awkward parallel structure. Use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons (Grammar Problem Type ID 16 and 14). Also list items correctly with commas and maintain parallel verb forms ('do', 'chat', 'write'). Replace the second 'because' with a semicolon or restructure to avoid repetition and improve clarity.

× Will I prefer laptop over desktop because it's convenient for me to carry it with me? So I can carry laptop with me in a buzz while I'm in college so it's easy?

✓ I prefer a laptop to a desktop because it is convenient to carry with me when I'm at college.

The original uses 'Will I prefer' incorrectly as a question and repeats 'so' and 'with me'; this is a modal/auxiliary misuse (Grammar Problem Type ID 4). Make it a simple present statement to answer the question. Use 'prefer A to B' and include articles ('a laptop'). Remove redundant phrases for clarity.

× I learned typing when I was in school and we basically got some classes for computer where we learned some typing and they gave us kind of software where we can do our homework and where we can accurate our typing skills.

✓ I learned to type when I was in school; we had computer classes where we practiced typing and used software to do homework and improve our typing skills.

Problems include incorrect verb forms ('learned typing' -> 'learned to type' or 'learned typing' is awkward), 'got some classes' is informal, and 'accurate our typing skills' is incorrect word choice (Grammar Problem Type IDs 5 and 13). Use past tense consistently ('had', 'practiced', 'used', 'improve') and correct collocations ('learn to type', 'improve skills').

× To improve my typing I will use phone because it's easy and convenient for me to carry and remember the where the letters are.

✓ To improve my typing, I use my phone because it is easy and convenient to carry and helps me remember where the letters are.

The sentence misuses pronouns and articles ('use phone', 'the where the letters are') and mixes future 'will' with a general habit (Grammar Problem Type IDs 12 and 6). Use present simple for habitual actions and include possessive pronoun 'my phone' and remove the extra 'the'.

× So after using my phone with my while during the chat I can use my laptop or desktop computer.

✓ After practicing on my phone while chatting, I can also use my laptop or desktop computer.

This sentence has confusing word order and extra words ('with my while during the chat') making it ungrammatical (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Rearrange to a clearer structure: 'After practicing on my phone while chatting' and add 'also' to show ability to transfer practice to larger devices.