Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but shorten and tighten sentences, correct minor grammar, and add one specific example to be more natural. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "more convenient way").

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, when I write essays I can quickly edit sentences and reorganize paragraphs on my laptop, which saves a lot of time.

Sugestão: Good direct response with a clear contrast. Make it more concise and natural by removing filler ("Well, it depends") and using a linking word to connect the two situations.

Exemplo: It depends: at home I usually use my laptop, but at the office I prefer a desktop keyboard because it’s more comfortable for long typing sessions.

Sugestão: This answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Give a precise age, avoid repeated phrases ("used to"), and add one concise detail about how you learned (method or practice).

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about 13. I practiced regularly on the computer at home and also used the school computer lab to complete assignments, which helped me improve my speed.

Sugestão: Good content but awkward phrasing and vague reference to a website. Be specific about the exercises and name the kind of website or describe it clearly, and correct grammar (e.g., "words per minute").

Exemplo: I improve my typing by doing daily drills for 15 minutes to boost accuracy and speed. I also use a typing website that times me and shows my words-per-minute and accuracy percentage, so I can track progress.

× Honestly I would pick typing over handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient way.

✓ Honestly, I would pick typing over handwriting because it is a much faster and more convenient way.

The phrase needs the article 'a' before 'much faster' to modify 'way' correctly, and a comma after 'Honestly' improves clarity. Without the article, the noun phrase 'much faster and more convenient way' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: include the appropriate article and punctuation: 'Honestly, I would pick typing over handwriting because it is a much faster and more convenient way.'

× Especially if I need to edit or make changes to documents it is very easy.

✓ Especially if I need to edit or make changes to documents, it is very easy.

The subordinate clause 'Especially if I need to edit or make changes to documents' should be followed by a comma before the main clause. Without the comma the sentence reads as a run-on and is less clear. Suggestion: add the comma after the introductory subordinate clause.

× Well, it depends.

✓ Well, it depends.

No correction needed. The present tense 'depends' correctly matches the general condition. This sentence is grammatical and requires no change.

× If I'm working at home, I work from my laptop, but if I am working from my office I tend to do typing more on the desktop keyboard.

✓ If I'm working at home, I use my laptop, but if I'm working at the office I tend to type more on the desktop keyboard.

'Work from my laptop' is awkward when describing using a device; 'use my laptop' is more natural. 'Do typing more' is ungrammatical — verb 'type' should be used rather than the noun 'typing'; also make the second conditional clause parallel with 'I'm working'. Suggestion: use 'use my laptop' and 'tend to type more' and keep parallel verb forms.

× I think it was earlier and maybe I was like 14 or 13 years old at that time.

✓ I think it was earlier; maybe I was about 13 or 14 years old at that time.

The ordering of ages is better as '13 or 14' and 'about' is preferred to 'like' in formal speech. Use of semicolon or comma improves flow. 'Was earlier' is vague; leaving it is acceptable but 'earlier' without reference is awkward. Suggestion: reorder ages, replace 'like' with 'about', and use punctuation to connect clauses.

× We used to have a computer at home where I used to practice typing and also do my assignments in my computer.

✓ We used to have a computer at home where I used to practice typing and also do my assignments on my computer.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a computer; use 'on my computer'. The sentence otherwise uses past habitual correctly. Suggestion: replace 'in' with 'on'.

× And also we used to have a computer lab where we could do our projects, our assignments and colleges.

✓ We also used to have a computer lab where we could do our projects and assignments, and work on college-related tasks.

The original ends with 'colleges', which is incorrect in context. Likely the speaker meant 'college work' or 'college-related tasks'. Also 'And also' is redundant; begin with 'We also'. Suggestion: remove redundancy, correct 'colleges' to 'college-related tasks' or similar, and simplify the list punctuation.

× I practice regularly with focused exercise to improve accuracy and speed.

✓ I practice regularly with focused exercises to improve accuracy and speed.

'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to match 'focused' and the general idea of repeated practice routines. Using plural makes the sentence natural. Suggestion: use 'focused exercises'.

× You have this one website where you could speed type and it tracks your number of words you type every second, so it is very feasible.

✓ There is a website where you can practice speed typing and it tracks the number of words you type per minute, so it is very useful.

Problems: 'You have this one website' is informal and vague—'There is a website' is clearer. 'Could' is not appropriate for ability here; use 'can'. 'Speed type' should be 'speed typing'. 'Tracks your number of words you type every second' is unrealistic and awkward; standard measure is 'words per minute'. 'Feasible' is incorrect in this context; 'useful' fits better. Suggestion: rephrase to 'There is a website where you can practice speed typing and it tracks the number of words you type per minute, so it is very useful.'