Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice and articles, avoid repetition. Add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because almost all my work is done on a desktop or laptop. Therefore, I’m used to typing and find it faster and more convenient.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (use articles and verb forms), and connect ideas with a linking phrase. Be specific about tasks and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I study fashion design. For example, I regularly edit documents and retouch photos for my projects.

Sugestão: Provide a clear time reference and simplify phrasing. Use correct noun phrases and word order; add a brief supporting detail about what you learned.

Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school, around the middle years, during computer classes. There I learned basic typing and how to use common software.

Sugestão: Answer directly in present tense, explain specific methods you use to improve (practice routines, tools, courses) and use linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like “when I was down.”

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising every day, using online typing exercises and timed tests. In addition, I try to type assignments without looking at the keys to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer type typing than handwriting because every all of my work are done on desktop or laptop, so I I I'm used to typing.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because all of my work is done on a desktop or laptop, so I'm used to typing.

Errors: 'type typing' is wrong form; 'prefer' is followed by 'to' + noun/gerund not 'than' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, treated here as word choice/structure), 'every all of my work' is redundant and incorrect, 'are' disagrees with singular collective noun 'all of my work' which takes singular 'is', and repeated fillers 'I I I'm' are disfluent. Suggestion: Use the gerund 'typing', use the preposition 'to' after 'prefer', remove redundant words, use 'is done' for collective singular, and avoid repetitions.

× For me, yes, I I always use keyboard on my laptop because my major fashion design. I always edit some documents online or make some photo shoots.

✓ For me, yes, I always use the keyboard on my laptop because my major is fashion design. I often edit documents online or take photos.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'keyboard' (Article errors), repetition 'I I' (disfluency), and sentence 'my major fashion design' lacks verb 'is' (sentence structure/subject-verb agreement). Also 'make some photo shoots' is awkward; use 'take photos' or 'do photoshoots'. Suggestion: Include the definite article, add the verb 'is' to link subject and complement, and use natural verb collocations like 'edit documents' and 'take photos'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? -> When I was in middle of first school primary school, I learned how to use keyboard and computer in computer class.

✓ When I was in the first year of primary school, I learned how to use the keyboard and the computer in computer class.

Errors: 'in middle of first school primary school' is ungrammatical and unclear; correct phrase is 'in the first year of primary school'. Missing articles before 'keyboard' and 'computer'—use 'the keyboard' and 'the computer'. Tense 'learned' is acceptable as past tense; adjust word order and articles for clarity. Suggestion: Use standard expressions for grade levels and include necessary articles.

× How do you improve your typing? -> When I was down, I always type on my keyboard every day for improving my skills.

✓ When I'm free, I always type on my keyboard every day to improve my skills.

Errors: 'When I was down' is likely incorrect expression—use 'when I'm free' or 'when I'm home' depending on meaning. 'I always type' is present tense and fine for a habitual action, but 'for improving my skills' is unidiomatic; use the infinitive 'to improve'. Also ensure tense matches habitual present. Suggestion: Use 'I'm' for current habitual situations and 'to' + verb to express purpose.