Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid errors like “convert my emotion” and word order issues.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, I can choose different handwriting styles and add drawings or underlines, which helps convey my emotions more clearly than plain typed text.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and reduce redundancy. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid repeated words like “I”.

Exemplo: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I study computer science and need to code for classes and projects. In addition, I often message friends, so I use the keyboard for chatting as well.

Sugestão: Clarify timeline and fix grammar. Use linking words to show sequence and be specific about what you practiced. Avoid awkward phrases like “a learning type in English.”

Exemplo: I learned to type in elementary school during technology classes, where we practiced typing Chinese to improve speed and accuracy. Later, in junior high school, I started formal practice in English typing as well.

Sugestão: Be a bit more concise and choose precise words. Use present tense consistently and correct collocations like “keywords” vs “specific keys” and avoid “which keyword or word I often mistyped.”

Exemplo: I improve my typing with online practice sites that provide timed passages. The exercises focus me on speed and accuracy, and the instant feedback shows which keys or words I commonly mistype so I can target them in further practice.

× I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and warmer.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and warmer.

No grammatical error requiring a preposition change; sentence is acceptable. (No change needed.)

× When I write by hand, I can choose my style and convert my emotion and more clearly than typing text.

✓ When I write by hand, I can choose my style and convey my emotions more clearly than when typing text.

The verb 'convert' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'convey' meaning to express. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match general meaning. Also add 'when' before 'typing' to make the comparison clear. Suggestion: use 'convey' and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× Yes, I tap on the laptop every day because I'm learning computer science so I have to coding every day on the laptop and also I sometimes I will type the text to my friend for chatting.

✓ Yes, I tap on the laptop every day because I'm learning computer science so I have to code every day on the laptop, and sometimes I type messages to my friends to chat.

After 'have to' use the base verb 'code' not 'coding'. Remove the extra 'I' after 'and also'. Use 'type messages' rather than 'type the text' and pluralize 'friends' if referring generally. Use 'to chat' instead of 'for chatting' for natural purpose expression. Also combine clauses with commas for clarity.

× I learned to type on the keyboard in elementary school.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard in elementary school.

Sentence is correct in past tense; no change needed.

× We had technology classes where the teacher asked us to type in Chinese and we practiced regularly to improve our speed and accuracy, and after that a learning type in English when I was in junior high school.

✓ We had technology classes where the teacher asked us to type in Chinese and we practiced regularly to improve our speed and accuracy, and after that I learned to type in English when I was in junior high school.

Incorrect phrase 'a learning type' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'I learned to type' to indicate the subject and correct verb form. Keep preposition 'in' for languages. Ensure parallel structure and past tense consistency.

× I use online typing practice websites that give me a short article to type under time limit.

✓ I use online typing practice websites that give me a short article to type under a time limit.

Missing article 'a' before 'time limit'. Use 'a time limit' for an indefinite singular noun. Sentence otherwise correct in present tense.

× This forced me to focus on speed and accuracy, and the immediate feedback helped me see which keyword or word I often mistyped.

✓ This forced me to focus on speed and accuracy, and the immediate feedback helped me see which keywords or words I often mistyped.

Mix of singular/plural: 'which keyword or word' is awkward; use 'which keywords or words' to cover both possibilities. Tense and verbs are correct (past). 'Often mistyped' appropriately in past tense.