Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons with examples. Avoid fillers (uh, like, etc.) and unclear phrases ("disadvantage design"). Use linking words (because, for example) to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and neater for long texts. For example, when I write essays or take notes, I can edit and format them easily on a computer. Therefore, typing saves time and makes my work clearer.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organize chronologically if mentioning past reasons. Remove repetition and fillers. Use one or two supporting details (why you prefer laptop) and linking words (because, since). Keep sentences natural and grammatical.

Exemplo: I type on a laptop every day because my father gave me one when I was a kid, and I became used to its portability. For instance, I can study and type anywhere in the house, so I rarely use a desktop.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference and describe the learning process with specific steps or tools. Avoid unsure phrases (I think, or something) and incorrect grammar (I learn → I learned). Use linking words (at first, then, after) to show progression and be concise.

Exemplo: I learned to type a few years ago using a typing app called TypingClub. At first it was challenging and I made many mistakes, but after regular practice and following the app's lessons, my speed and accuracy improved.

Sugestão: Give a structured answer: state the main method, then provide specific details (how often, which exercises or app, measurable progress). Avoid vague repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words (for example, after, by) and limit to a few sentences.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing daily for about one hour, mainly using a typing app that provides drills and timed tests. For example, I do finger-placement exercises and take speed tests twice a week, which has increased my words-per-minute from 30 to 55.

× I prefer typing because typing is easy to write, uh, things like for example, when I write a long essay and many etcetera.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easier to write things like long essays and so on.

The sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms: 'typing is easy to write' should be 'it is easier to write' to compare writing by typing to handwriting. 'Many etcetera' is ungrammatical; use 'and so on' or 'etc.' Also remove redundant phrases like 'for example' when listing one example. Suggestion: use comparative adjective 'easier' and clear list phrases.

× I think so like I prefer typing instead of writing because handwriting is uh, disadvantage design.

✓ I prefer typing instead of handwriting because handwriting has disadvantages.

The original sentence has unclear structure and wrong word choice: 'handwriting is uh, disadvantage design' is ungrammatical. Change to 'handwriting has disadvantages' to express the intended meaning. Keep subject-verb-object order.

× I frequently type, so I.

✓ I type frequently, so I am more comfortable with it.

The sentence is incomplete ('so I.'), lacking a main verb and complement. Complete the idea by adding a result clause, e.g., 'so I am more comfortable with it.' Ensure a full clause with subject and verb.

× Yeah, I type on laptop keyboard because when I was a kid, so my father on gifted me on my birthday laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard because when I was a kid my father gifted me a laptop for my birthday.

Articles and prepositions are misused: 'on laptop keyboard' should be 'on a laptop keyboard.' 'My father on gifted me on my birthday laptop' contains incorrect word order and extraneous prepositions. Use 'gifted me a laptop for my birthday.' Remove redundant 'so'.

× So I was like addicted to laptop so easily.

✓ I became easily addicted to the laptop.

Colloquial filler 'was like' and word order 'addicted to laptop so easily' are awkward. Use 'became easily addicted to the laptop' or 'I got addicted to the laptop easily.' Include the article 'the' or 'a' as appropriate.

× I type on laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop.

Missing article before singular countable noun: use 'a laptop.' Alternatively, 'I type on laptops' if speaking generally.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? - I learn on I think that is typing hub app or something.

✓ I learned on, I think, a typing hub app or something.

Question asks past tense 'When did you learn...'; the answer must use past tense 'learned' (or 'learnt'). The original uses present 'learn.' Also add article 'a' before 'typing hub app.' Keep past tense consistent.

× Yeah, I learned from them. First of all, I was like it is very challenging for me.

✓ I learned from it. At first, it was very challenging for me.

Tense and reference errors: 'them' likely refers to the app (singular), so use 'it.' 'First of all, I was like it is very challenging' mixes past and present; use past 'it was very challenging.' Use 'At first' or 'Initially' for clarity.

× I don't know, I'm not a more efficient to like keyboard.

✓ I didn't know; I wasn't very efficient at using the keyboard.

'a more efficient' is incorrect here. Use 'very efficient' and the correct preposition 'at using the keyboard.' Also match past tense 'didn't know' with 'wasn't.' This clarifies ability.

× So then when I practice and I use 10 like first of all, I do not use 4 three hands so.

✓ When I practiced, I used the typing program with ten-finger practice; at first I did not use all four or three fingers correctly.

Original is unclear and ungrammatical: 'use 10 like' likely refers to ten-finger typing; 'do not use 4 three hands' is nonsensical. Rephrase to explain progressive practice: 'I used ten-finger practice; at first I did not use all my fingers correctly.' Ensure verbs are in past tense to match 'When I practiced.'

× I improve my typing. I do daily practice, like for example, yeah, when I was free from my studies.

✓ I improved my typing by practicing daily when I was free from my studies.

Tense inconsistency: 'I improve' and 'when I was free' mix present and past. Use past 'improved' to match 'when I was free.' Also combine clauses for clarity and use 'practicing daily.'

× So I do frequently typing to three and four hours.

✓ So I frequently practiced typing for three to four hours.

Word order and verb form: 'do frequently typing to three and four hours' should be 'frequently practiced typing for three to four hours.' Use past tense and preposition 'for' with duration. Use the range 'three to four hours.'

× So I improve my typing and also that app on the app and also I practice, practice, make more.

✓ I improved my typing using the app, and I practiced repeatedly to get better.

Pronoun and phrase errors: 'that app on the app' is redundant and unclear. Use 'using the app.' 'Practice, practice, make more' is informal and ungrammatical; replace with 'practiced repeatedly' or 'practiced more.' Ensure past tense consistency.