Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because it's master, faster and easy for me to write a essay and report or even the PTF and it can reduce mistake.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I'm tired on a desktop and every day, because I my daily life work on projects, I meet to writing a report by the desktop.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
When I'm secondary school, I'm learning how to type on the keyboard because we have the computer classes the teachers teach us to use the type to.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think we meet more practice practice regularly because you meet more practice it will make you more interesting and how you get faster, I think.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 42.0Sugestão: 回答要直接且语法准确。注意句子结构、时态和单词选择,把含糊或错误的词(如“master”, “the PTF”)改为合适表达;用1–2个支持细节并使用连接词使回答更连贯。可按“主旨句 + 原因 + 举例”格式,保持不超过5句。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient for me. For example, when I write essays and reports I can edit quickly and correct mistakes easily. Also, typed documents are easier to share with colleagues, which helps with teamwork.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: 回答要先明确是“desktop or laptop”,避免含糊表达。修正语法错误(如“I'm tired on a desktop”应为“I use a desktop”或“I type on a desktop”)。用连贯句说明原因并给出具体情境或频率,控制在最多5句。
Exemplo: I usually type on a desktop every day because I work on long projects that need a large screen and a full keyboard. For instance, I often spend several hours writing detailed reports at my desk.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 注意时态和语序,使用准确的时间短语(例如“in secondary school”),并把句子简洁化。可以说出更具体的年龄或年级并补充一条细节(如课程内容或练习方法)。
Exemplo: I learned to type in secondary school when I was about 13. We had regular computer classes where the teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practised typing exercises on the school computers.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 要给出具体可行的方法并用连贯的连接词。避免重复词汇,使用明确的动词短语(如“practise regularly”, “use typing software”, “focus on accuracy and speed”)。限制在3–4句,包含方法和效果。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing programs that track speed and accuracy. I also focus on proper finger placement and set short daily goals, which helps me get faster without making more mistakes.
× I prefer typing because it's master, faster and easy for me to write a essay and report or even the PTF and it can reduce mistake.
✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and easier for me to write an essay, a report or even the PTF, and it can reduce mistakes.
句中“master”用法不当,应使用比较级或形容词来描述速度或熟练度;“faster and easy”在并列形容词时需保持形式一致,改为“faster and easier”。“a essay”中冠词用法错误,应为“an essay”。“reduce mistake”应为复数“reduce mistakes”。建议:并列形容词需保持形式一致(两个均为形容词比较级或原级),注意元音开头单词前用“an”,名词复数与否要根据语境。
× Yes, I'm tired on a desktop and every day, because I my daily life work on projects, I meet to writing a report by the desktop.
✓ Yes, I use a desktop every day because in my daily work I work on projects and often have to write reports on the desktop.
原句主谓不一致并且出现多处不自然结构。“I'm tired on a desktop”表意不清,应改为“I use a desktop every day”。“I my daily life work on projects”缺少动词和连贯性,改为“in my daily work I work on projects”。“I meet to writing a report”错误使用动词“meet”及不定式形式,改为“often have to write reports”。建议:保证句子有明确主语和动词,使用常见搭配(use a desktop, work on projects, write reports)。
× When I'm secondary school, I'm learning how to type on the keyboard because we have the computer classes the teachers teach us to use the type to.
✓ When I was in secondary school, I learned how to type on the keyboard because we had computer classes and the teachers taught us how to type.
时间状语“When I was in secondary school”指过去,应使用过去时。原句错误地混用现在时“I'm learning”并使用不正确短语“use the type to”。正确为过去进行或简单过去“learned”,并将“the teachers teach us to use the type to”改为“the teachers taught us how to type”。建议:根据时间状语选择时态(过去时间用过去时),并使用固定表达“learn how to”、“teach someone how to do something”。
× I think we meet more practice practice regularly because you meet more practice it will make you more interesting and how you get faster, I think.
✓ I think we should practice more regularly because the more you practice, the more interesting it becomes and the faster you get.
原句“meet more practice”用法错误,应该使用动词“practice”作动词或名词,并使用比较结构“the more... the more...”来表达递进关系。“make you more interesting”意思不明,改为“it becomes more interesting”或“you will be more interested”。建议:使用“practice”作为动词(practice regularly)或名词(more practice),并学习常见比较句型“the more..., the more...”。