Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장이 많이 어색하고 중복 표현이 있으며 문법 오류가 있습니다. 우선 간단한 주제문으로 바로 대답한 뒤, 한두 개의 구체적인 이유를 연결어(예: because, so, therefore)로 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 불필요한 반복을 피하고 시제와 관사 사용을 바로잡으세요.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate better when I take notes. For example, when I attend meetings I write key points by hand, which makes it easier to remember them later.

Sugestão: 답변은 이해되지만 문법(조동사, 시제, 어순)과 유창성이 부족합니다. 간단한 문장 구조를 사용하고 연결어(for, because)를 정확히 쓰며 한두 문장으로 명확히 표현하세요. 불필요한 단어는 제거하세요.

Exemplo: I usually use a laptop keyboard because my company provides a laptop for work. Since everything is set up on it, it's more convenient than using a desktop.

Sugestão: 의미는 전달되지만 문법과 어휘 선택에서 큰 오류가 있습니다. 과거 시제를 올바르게 사용하고, ‘ordered’ 대신 ‘encouraged’ 또는 ‘told’ 같은 자연스러운 동사를 쓰세요. 구체적인 시간이나 장소를 한두 가지 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child because my mother encouraged me to take lessons. I attended a small typing academy for a few months to practice proper finger placement.

Sugestão: 답변이 매우 반복적이고 구체성이 없습니다. 연습 방법(온라인 연습, 타자 연습 프로그램, 일상에서의 연습 등)을 구체적으로 하나 또는 두 개 제시하고, 연결어(when, so, then)를 사용해 흐름을 만들어야 합니다.

Exemplo: To improve my typing, I use an online typing program for 15 minutes every day to increase my speed. I also practice by typing short articles and checking my errors to reduce mistakes.

× I'm usually prepared the handwriting because it is it was more than I can more than focus on the writing the writing my note, and I usually prepare the original 1.

✓ I'm usually prepared to write by hand because I can focus more on my notes, and I usually prepare the original by hand.

The sentence has several structural problems: incorrect verb forms and redundant phrases. Use 'prepared to write by hand' for intention, 'focus more on my notes' for clarity, and remove repeated phrases. Also 'original 1' is unclear; replaced with 'original by hand' to match context. Suggestion: break long ideas into shorter clauses, use correct infinitive 'to write' and place adverb 'more' after 'focus.'

× I many use the laptop keyboard because when I working in my company.

✓ I often use the laptop keyboard because when I am working at my company,

'Many' is incorrect here; use 'often' or 'frequently' to indicate frequency. Missing auxiliary verb and wrong verb form: use 'I am working' for present continuous. Use preposition 'at' for location 'at my company.'

× That already set up the laptop, that's why I use laptop keyboard.

✓ The laptop is already set up, so that's why I use the laptop keyboard.

Use passive voice 'is set up' to describe state, and add article 'the' before 'laptop keyboard.' Connect ideas with 'so' or 'therefore.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'laptop is set up.'

× When I was young, my mother ordered to older to me you have to training the using keyboard.

✓ When I was young, my mother told me that I had to train in using the keyboard.

'Ordered to older to me' is ungrammatical. Use 'told me' or 'ordered me' for reporting. Maintain past tense 'had to' for obligation in the past. Use 'train in using the keyboard' or 'practice using the keyboard.'

× So sometimes I went to Academy for training.

✓ So sometimes I went to an academy for training.

Add article 'an' before 'academy.' Capitalization of 'Academy' is unnecessary. The sentence is otherwise past tense and acceptable.

× When I practice the typing, practice the typing, I open the book and I tried, I tried practicing.

✓ When I practice typing, I open a book and try practicing.

Do not use 'the' before 'typing' in this context; use the verb + -ing form 'practice typing.' Avoid repetition 'practice the typing, practice the typing.' Keep consistent present simple tense 'I open' and 'I try.' Remove duplicate phrases and use 'a book' with indefinite article. Use parallel verb forms.