Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence and conciseness. Start with a direct topic sentence, use one linking word, and avoid repetition (e.g., "office work" twice). Add one specific example to strengthen the response. Keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting for personal notes because it helps me remember information better. However, for formal tasks such as preparing reports at work, I choose typing because it’s faster and makes editing easier. For example, when I draft monthly summaries I type so I can quickly revise and share them.

Sugestão: The answer communicates your preference but has grammatical errors, repetition, and unclear phrases. Fix sentence structure and verb agreement, remove repeated words, and use clear linking words. Provide one concrete reason or short example about comfort or accuracy. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually type on a desktop because the full-size keyboard reduces my errors and increases typing speed. It’s also more comfortable and less noisy when I have to work for several hours, such as during long data-entry sessions.

Sugestão: Good direct response, but make it more natural and specific. Use a clear topic sentence with a time reference, and add one brief detail about what you learned (e.g., touch-typing or basic skills). Keep it concise and correct small grammar issues.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child at school; we had computer classes that taught basic typing skills. In those lessons I practiced touch-typing and familiarized myself with the keyboard layout.

Sugestão: Your method is good and specific, but the answer needs grammatical corrections and a clearer structure. Begin with a topic sentence, use linking words (e.g., "for example" or "so"), and correct verb forms. Mention a measurable result if possible (e.g., speed improvement). Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising for ten minutes every day; for example, I set an alarm and type about my daily tasks. This routine has increased my speed and accuracy because I repeatedly type common words and phrases.

× 'For personal work and notes I prefer handwriting, it helps me to remember my work.'

✓ 'For personal work and notes, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember my work.'

'Run-on sentence / sentence structure error. Two independent clauses were joined with a comma but without a conjunction. Use a conjunction like because to show cause and add a comma after the introductory phrase. Also, omit the unnecessary to after helps.'

× 'And for formal work like office work, I prefer typing, it is faster and easier to edit.'

✓ 'For formal work, such as office tasks, I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to edit.'

'Run-on sentence / sentence structure error and word choice. Two independent clauses were incorrectly joined with a comma. Replace with a subordinating conjunction (because). Also improve word choice: use such as and office tasks for clarity.'

× 'I prefer typing on a desktop because it is faster than I I make fewer mistakes with the full size keyboard.'

✓ 'I prefer typing on a desktop because it is faster and I make fewer mistakes with a full-size keyboard.'

'Present tense and sentence structure issues. Remove the duplicated I and reorder the comparison: faster, and I make fewer mistakes. Add hyphen in full-size and use a full sentence with correct conjunction.'

× 'It is also much quieter and more comfortable for long time impressions.'

✓ 'It is also much quieter and more comfortable for long periods of time.'

'Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and collocation. "Long time impressions" is not idiomatic. Use the noun phrase long periods of time or for long durations to express extended comfort.'

× 'So you are usually choose a desktop where I need to work for several hours.'

✓ 'So I usually choose a desktop when I need to work for several hours.'

'Sentence structure and incorrect pronoun/word order. The subject and verb were wrong (you are usually choose). Change to I usually choose and use when to indicate the condition.'

× 'When I was a kid I went to school and we had class for computer.'

✓ 'When I was a kid, I went to school and we had computer classes.'

'Past tense is correct but the noun phrase is unidiomatic. Use computer classes (plural) instead of class for computer, and add a comma after the introductory clause.'

× 'I learned from the school computer classes.'

✓ 'I learned from the computer classes at school.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure / word order. Reordering the phrase makes the sentence more natural in English: computer classes at school. The original is understandable but awkward.'

× 'Improving my typing.'

✓ 'I improve my typing.'

'Sentence without a verb (fragment). "Improving my typing" is a fragment; use a complete clause such as I improve my typing or To improve my typing, I ... depending on context.'

× 'I set an alarm and spent 10 minutes each day typing about my thoughts on my daily duty.'

✓ 'I set an alarm and spend 10 minutes each day typing about my thoughts and daily tasks.'

'Past tense versus present habit. The question asks how you improve typing (present habit), so use present tense spend. Also revise "daily duty" to daily tasks for natural phrasing.'

× 'Practicing this way help me increase speed and accuracy because I get used to typing common words and sentences under direction.'

✓ 'Practicing this way helps me increase speed and accuracy because I get used to typing common words and sentences under timed conditions.'

'Verb + -ing form subject-verb agreement and word choice. The gerund phrase Practicing this way is a singular subject and requires helps (third person singular). "Under direction" is unclear; timed conditions or under time pressure is more likely intended.'