Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Улучшите связность и грамматическую точность. Начинайте с чёткого топик‑предложения, избегайте незаконченных фраз и лишних повторов. Добавьте одно-два конкретных объяснения, используя связующие слова (for example, because, so) и корректную лексику (prefer handwriting, typing, computers).

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I find it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can summarise ideas more easily, so I study more effectively.

Sugestão: Исправьте словарные ошибки и формулировки. Не используйте неопределённые и неверные слова (например, "Jack top"). Дайте прямой ответ (desktop or laptop), затем объясните коротко причину, используя связку (because, so).

Exemplo: I usually type on a desktop keyboard because I don't own a laptop. As a student, I use the computer in my school's computer lab for most of my work.

Sugestão: Улучшите точность времени и ясность. Ответ уже хорош: содержателен и логичен, но следует убрать лишние слова и сделать фразу более естественной. Используйте связку времени (when, since) и конкретные детали.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was six, in the first grade. Our computer teacher showed us basic typing skills, and since then I have been comfortable using a keyboard.

Sugestão: Сделайте ответ более конкретным: назовите способы практики и используйте корректные формы (much work, improve my typing). Добавьте связку причинно-следственных предложений (because, so) и один пример конкретной деятельности.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing during computer classes at school because I have a lot of homework at home. For instance, I complete typing exercises and type short essays to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I should say that I prefer more handwriting because I'm not very.

✓ I should say that I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing.

The original sentence misuses 'more' with an uncountable noun and ends incomplete with 'I'm not very.' Replace 'prefer more handwriting' with 'prefer handwriting' and complete the idea: 'I'm not very good at typing.' This corrects adjective/adverb use and completes the clause. Suggestion: Use 'prefer handwriting' and follow 'I'm not very' with an adjective like 'good at typing.'

× I don't like using computer every time.

✓ I don't like using the computer every time.

Countable noun 'computer' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to computers in general contexts. Use 'the computer' or 'computers' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Say 'using the computer' or 'using computers'.

× It is better for me to write by my own without typing.

✓ It is better for me to write by myself without typing.

Incorrect reflexive pronoun 'my own' is not suitable here; 'by myself' is the correct reflexive phrase meaning 'alone' or 'on my own.' Replace 'my own' with 'myself.' Suggestion: Use 'by myself' or 'on my own.'

× On computer.

✓ On the computer.

Fragment 'On computer.' lacks structure and article. Complete the phrase to 'On the computer' to make it a valid prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Use full sentence or attach to previous sentence: 'I don't like using the computer.'

× I suppose that I type on a Jack top because I don't have a laptop and keyboard.

✓ I suppose that I type on a desktop because I don't have a laptop or keyboard.

'Jack top' is likely a mispronunciation of 'desktop.' Also 'and' is incorrect when negating possession of two items; use 'or' to indicate neither item is possessed. Correct adjective/adverb usage and conjunction. Suggestion: Use 'desktop' and 'or' in negative contexts: 'I don't have a laptop or a keyboard.'

× Umm, I'm a student and as usual we have some desk to write on it.

✓ Umm, I'm a student, and usually we have a desk to write on.

Original has redundancy 'to write on it' after 'desk' and incorrect 'some desk.' Use 'a desk' and place the prepositional phrase correctly: 'a desk to write on.' Also remove redundant pronoun 'it.' Suggestion: Say 'we usually have a desk to write on.'

× It was when I was six years old and from the first grade our computer teacher taught us how to type on the laptop, and from that time I really understood how it works.

✓ It was when I was six years old; from the first grade our computer teacher taught us how to type on a laptop, and from that time I really understood how it worked.

Tense inconsistency: 'understood' is past simple but 'how it works' is present; change to 'how it worked' to maintain past narration. Also 'the laptop' should be 'a laptop' as it is general. Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout when describing past events.

× I usually practice this skill at school because when I'm at home I have too many work to do so I do not have time for improving my typing.

✓ I usually practice this skill at school because when I'm at home I have too much work to do, so I do not have time to improve my typing.

Use 'too much work' (uncountable) not 'too many work.' After 'time' use the infinitive 'to improve' rather than the gerund 'for improving.' Also add comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'too much work' and 'time to improve my typing.'