Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
And I prefer typing on laptop because it's more convenient and faster. For example, during lectures I can quickly take notes, organize and store them digitally for later review, which saves time compared to using pen and paper and makes it easy to search and show my notes.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Every day definitely my teacher would give me assignment on the online and I need to stop submit them online. So uh, the electronic version is necessary. I would uh, tap, tapping and uh complete homework online everyday.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Honestly, I don't have particular license to teach me how to use the keyboard ever. I just figured out by myself in my childhood and when I made the question I tend to the teacher and the parents, they will tell me how to figure out.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I improve my typing by practicing everyday and learning touch typing. At first I typed slowly because I wasn't familiar with the keyboard layout, but after regular practice I become more faster and more accurate.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 78.0Sugestão: 回答总体清楚,但需改进自然流畅性与句子简洁性。避免使用多余开头语(如“And”),并用更自然的连接词简洁地表达理由和举例。注意语法(例如 make → makes,复数/单复数、时态)和词汇搭配(search and show → search and access)。建议将答案控制在3-4句内,主句明确、细节具体。
Exemplo: I prefer typing on a laptop because it’s more convenient and faster. For example, during lectures I can quickly take and organize notes digitally for later review. This saves time compared with pen and paper and makes it easy to search and access my notes.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 内容能传达但语言不够准确与连贯。存在语法错误(would give → gives;on the online → online;stop submit → submit;tap/tapping冗余),口语填充词较多。建议说话时使用简洁句子,注意动词时态和固定搭配,并减少犹豫词。可以用一两句直接回答并补充具体情况。
Exemplo: I type on my laptop every day because my teacher posts assignments online and I submit them electronically. Usually I open the assignment, type my answers, and upload the file before the deadline.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 表达不够清晰,有很多用词和结构错误(license to teach me → formal lesson; when I made the question → when I had questions; I tend to the teacher → I asked teachers/parents)。建议用一到两句直接说明何时学会,并补充简短细节(自学还是受教)。保持句子简洁并注意时态一致。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child, mostly by teaching myself. When I had problems, I asked my parents or teachers for help, and they showed me the right finger positions.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答内容合适,但注意语法与用词(everyday → every day; become more faster → became faster 或 more accurate 不重复比较词)。可以用更具体的方法或工具来丰富细节(例如使用练习软件、设定目标、每天练习多长时间)。句子控制在3句内会更自然。
Exemplo: I improved my typing by practicing every day and learning touch typing. At first I typed slowly because I wasn’t familiar with the layout, but after regular practice and using online typing exercises I became faster and more accurate.
× And I prefer typing on laptop because it's more convenient and faster.
✓ And I prefer typing on a laptop because it's more convenient and faster.
句中缺少不定冠词“a”,正确表达为“on a laptop”。在英文中,可数单数名词前通常需要冠词或其他限定词。建议记住可数单数名词需搭配冠词(a/an/the)或指示代词。
× For example, during lectures I can quickly take notes, organize and store them digitally for later review, which saves time compared to using pen and paper and makes it easy to search and show my notes.
✓ For example, during lectures I can quickly take notes, organize and store them digitally for later review, which saves time compared to using pen and paper and makes it easy to search and show my notes.
该句语法总体正确,无需改动。仅提醒“using pen and paper”可选用冠词(using pen and paper / using a pen and paper)但原句可接受。
× Every day definitely my teacher would give me assignment on the online and I need to stop submit them online.
✓ Every day my teacher gives me assignments online and I need to submit them online.
原句语序混乱,有时态、数和介词错误。1) “definitely”位置不当,导致语序不自然,应放句中或句尾;2) “would give”暗示过去习惯,语境为现在,应用现在时“gives”;3) “assignment”应为复数“assignments”;4) “on the online”和“stop submit”均错误,改为“online”作为副词,且“need to submit”是正确短语。建议:按主语—谓语—宾语顺序组织句子,注意时态与名词单复数。
× So uh, the electronic version is necessary. I would uh, tap, tapping and uh complete homework online everyday.
✓ So the electronic version is necessary. I would tap and complete my homework online every day.
原句混合了不定式、进行时和重复词,造成结构不清。1) 不应在并列动作中使用“tap, tapping”,应保持形式一致;2) “everyday”应为副词词组“every day”;3) 省略的物主代词需补上“my homework”。建议并列动词使用相同形式(不定式/原形),注意“every day”与“everyday”的区分。
× Honestly, I don't have particular license to teach me how to use the keyboard ever.
✓ Honestly, I never had any formal lessons to teach me how to use the keyboard.
原句时态和词汇搭配不当:“don't have...ever”与语境(过去学会打字)不符,应使用过去时“never had”;“particular license”表达不当,改为“formal lessons”。建议用合适的名词搭配并选择与语境一致的时态。
× I just figured out by myself in my childhood and when I made the question I tend to the teacher and the parents, they will tell me how to figure out.
✓ I just figured it out by myself in my childhood, and when I had questions I would ask my teachers and parents, and they would tell me how to do it.
原句包含多个结构问题:1) “figured out”需接宾语(it);2) “when I made the question”错误,应为“when I had questions”;3) “I tend to the teacher”用词和介词错误,应为“I would ask my teachers”;4) 时态混用,改为过去常态“would”。建议将句子拆分或用连词正确连接,保证每一部分时态一致并使用正确动词搭配。
× I improve my typing by practicing everyday and learning touch typing.
✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day and learning touch typing.
主要错误是“everyday”与“every day”的混淆。“everyday”为形容词,表示“日常的”,而此处需副词短语“every day”。建议区分两者:表示频率用“every day”。
× At first I typed slowly because I wasn't familiar with the keyboard layout, but after regular practice I become more faster and more accurate.
✓ At first I typed slowly because I wasn't familiar with the keyboard layout, but after regular practice I became faster and more accurate.
错误包括时态和比较级:1) “become”应为过去时“became”,因为前半句使用过去时;2) “more faster”是冗余错误,比较级应为“faster”而非“more faster”。建议注意时态一致性与比较级形成(单词本身使用-er结尾时不用加 more)。