Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Well, definitely, I really prefer typing umm, because lot most of my assignments and the work I choose to type on my computer and the typing is more convenient and uh umm, easier to edit everywhere than you handwriting uh, on papers.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I always type on my laptop keyboard every single day. That's because my my essays, my research and other works are on my laptop. So I choose to laptop keyboard.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Well, umm, when I learn first learn how to type on keyboard in back in my primary school, because we have a computer classes, our teacher told me how to practice our typing, typing skills. Uh, and I also, uh, through some typing games to practice.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Well, it's not doubted that practicing, uh, regularly, such as you can choose, uh, chat with other friends online or type some words or sentence on your computer. For me, uh, I choose to, uh, type some words and sentence for on my computer, that's.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答要更簡潔並注意語法和流暢性。避免過多填充詞(如 umm、uh)和重複(如 "lot most"、"you handwriting")。先給出主題句表明立場,然後用一到兩個具體理由支持,並用連接詞(例如 because, so)保持邏輯連貫。注意冠詞和代詞的正確使用。
Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my assignments are done on a computer, and typing makes it much easier to edit and organize my work. For example, I can quickly rearrange paragraphs and fix mistakes without rewriting the whole page.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 回答要更自然並修正重複和語法錯誤。先直接回答問題,接著用1–2句具體原因說明,避免重複詞(如 "my my")和不完整結構(如 "choose to laptop keyboard")。使用連接詞如 because 或 so 來串連原因。
Exemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I do all my essays and research on that device. For instance, I usually write and edit my assignments on my laptop, so carrying it is more convenient than using a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答應更有條理並注意時態和語法。先給出時間點(例如 "in primary school"),然後簡要說明學習方式。避免過多填充詞和重複(如 "first learn"、"typing, typing")。可用連接詞 like 或 by 來引出方法。
Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school when we had computer classes. My teacher showed us proper finger placement, and I improved my speed by practicing with typing games and regular exercises.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答需更具體並避免籠統表述和口頭禪。直接說明自己具體做法(例如每天練習打字軟件、定時練習、使用速度測試網站等),並給出頻率或成果以增加說服力。使用連接詞如 for example 或 such as 引出具體方法。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing tests and exercises. For example, I spend 15 minutes each day on a typing website and also chat with friends to practice typing naturally, which has helped increase my speed and accuracy.
× because lot most of my assignments and the work I choose to type on my computer and the typing is more convenient and uh umm, easier to edit everywhere than you handwriting uh, on papers.
✓ because most of my assignments and other work I do are typed on my computer, and typing is more convenient and easier to edit than handwriting on paper.
句子中“lot most of my assignments and the work”结构混乱,存在可数/不可数及复数形式使用不当。应使用“most of my assignments and other work”或“most of my assignments and the work I do”,并且主语为复数时谓语用复数(are)。另外“handwriting uh, on papers”冗余,应为“handwriting on paper”。建议简化名词短语,确保主语与谓语数一致,并去掉多余词。
× So I choose to laptop keyboard.
✓ So I choose the laptop keyboard.
原句中缺少冠词并且动词“choose”后应接宾语短语“the laptop keyboard”。第三人称单数问题体现在动词形式不合适时,但此处主要是冠词和句子结构错误。建议在可数名词前使用合适的冠词或限定词:"the laptop keyboard"。
× Yes, I always type on my laptop keyboard every single day. That's because my my essays, my research and other works are on my laptop.
✓ Yes, I always type on my laptop keyboard every single day. That's because my essays, research and other work are on my laptop.
“my my”为重复;“other works”在此语境中不自然,通常用不可数名词“other work”或复数“other pieces of work”。时态本身正确,但名词形式需调整。建议删除重复词,使用更自然的名词搭配。
× Well, umm, when I learn first learn how to type on keyboard in back in my primary school, because we have a computer classes, our teacher told me how to practice our typing, typing skills.
✓ Well, when I first learned how to type on a keyboard back in primary school, we had computer classes and our teacher taught us how to practice typing skills.
这里涉及过去时间,应使用过去时:“learn”应为过去式“learned”,且“first learn”重复。“in back in my primary school”冗余,应为“back in primary school”或“when I was in primary school”。“we have a computer classes”时态和单复数错误,应为“we had computer classes”。“told me how to practice our typing”中代词和时态也不一致,改为“taught us how to practice typing skills”。建议统一使用过去时,修正单复数和代词。
× Uh, and I also, uh, through some typing games to practice.
✓ Uh, and I also practiced through some typing games.
原句缺少谓语,结构不完整。使用动词-ing形式时要注意搭配,这里应使用过去式“practiced”与前文过去时一致,或改为“practiced by playing some typing games”。建议补全动词并调整为正确的被动或主动结构。
× Well, it's not doubted that practicing, uh, regularly, such as you can choose, uh, chat with other friends online or type some words or sentence on your computer.
✓ Well, there's no doubt that practicing regularly helps. For example, you can chat with friends online or type some words or sentences on your computer.
原句“it's not doubted that practicing”不自然,应为“there's no doubt that practicing... helps”。另外“such as you can choose, uh, chat”混乱,包含情态动词“can”用法但位置不当。建议分两句表达,先陈述结论,再用“for example”引出建议,情态动词“can”置于从句中。
× type some words or sentence on your computer.
✓ type some words or sentences on your computer.
“some words or sentence”中“sentence”应与“words”保持数一致,改为复数“sentences”。建议保持并列项的数一致以避免量词错误。
× For me, uh, I choose to, uh, type some words and sentence for on my computer, that's.
✓ For me, I like to type some words and sentences on my computer.
原句结构混乱,有多余介词“for on”,不完整的结尾“that's”。应简化为完整句子“I like to type some words and sentences on my computer.” 建议去掉语气填充词,保持句子完整并校正介词和并列名词形式。