Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答题需更直接并保持句子简洁，避免重复和语气词。要有主题句表明偏好，然后用1–2个具体原因支持并用连接词衔接。注意语法（如 prefer to handwrite 或 prefer handwriting；show our emotions；hand-drawn pictures）。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me express emotions more naturally. For example, when I write by hand I often add small drawings and different styles of letters, which makes notes more memorable and enjoyable.

Sugestão: 回答应先直接说明用台式机还是笔记本，然后给出具体原因并用连词衔接。注意时态和词汇搭配（e.g. I type on a desktop every day because I study economics and need to process large datasets; it's difficult to handle big data on a laptop）。避免含糊的指代（this table）。

Exemplo: I type on a desktop computer every day because I study economics and often work with large datasets. Desktops have more processing power and a larger screen, so they make it easier to create detailed graphs and analyze data.

Sugestão: 回答要明确时间点（e.g. in primary school）并用一两句说明学习方式或内容。注意语法和词汇（e.g. teacher taught us typing, we practiced with educational software and PowerPoint）。避免不清晰的词和重复。

Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school when we had a computer class. The teacher taught typing basics and we practiced with simple educational programs and exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

Sugestão: 回答应先给出方法（如 daily practice, online typing tests, touch-typing courses），并用具体例子说明如何练习。去掉重复并用连接词组织句子（for example, by doing homework, writing essays, or using typing websites）。

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day. For example, I write my homework and essays by typing and I also use online typing tests to monitor my speed and accuracy, which helps me get faster over time.

× I prefer like to handwriting right now, uh, because I think it's a lot of fun by using the words to show our emotional at that time.

✓ I prefer handwriting right now because I think it's a lot of fun to use words to show our emotions at that time.

句中“prefer like to handwriting”语序和词类使用错误：’prefer’后直接接动名词（handwriting），而不应有‘like to’。此外，’by using the words to show our emotional’中，‘emotional’为形容词，应使用名词‘emotions’，‘by using the words to show’结构冗长且不自然，改为不定式‘to use words to show’更恰当。建议：prefer后接动名词或不带like的动词不定式结构；注意形容词/名词形式的选择（emotion vs emotional）。

× And we can enjoy using some, uh, picture and using some handwrite pictures.

✓ And we can enjoy using some pictures and drawing some handwritten pictures.

原句中‘picture’应为复数形式‘pictures’，同时‘handwrite pictures’用法不正确，‘handwritten’为形容词形式修饰名词或使用动词‘draw/drawings’更合适。建议：名词复数与形容词形式要正确搭配，handwritten用于修饰名词。

× I type on this table every day because I was an economics student.

✓ I type at this table every day because I am an economics student.

句中主语时态与后半句时态不一致：学生仍然是经济学学生应使用现在时‘am’，且‘type on this table’常用介词为‘at’或‘sit at the table’。此外这里也涉及介词使用（参考第11类），但主要为数与时态的一致性及表达自然性。建议：陈述现在身份用现在时；‘type at the table’更地道。

× I usually use a lot of data into to make a graphic.

✓ I usually use a lot of data to make graphics.

原句中多余或错误的介词‘into to’应删除，且‘graphic’在此处通常用复数‘graphics’或用不可数的‘graphical tools’视语境。建议：动词短语‘use data to do something’；注意名词单复数的搭配。

× It's very hard to use this big data in the laptop.

✓ It's very hard to use this big data on a laptop.

介词使用错误：英语中表示在笔记本电脑上操作应使用‘on a laptop’而不是‘in the laptop’；另外‘big data’通常作为不可数名词整体使用，但前面加冠词取决于语境，常说‘use big data’或‘use this large dataset’更清晰。建议：用'on a laptop'，并考虑用'dataset'来表达大量数据时更精确。

× Maybe, I think it was in my primary school we have a computer class and we in the class the teachers will teach us to provide key boys and we study the PPT and some worse aid applications to.

✓ Maybe I think it was in primary school. We had a computer class where the teachers taught us to use keyboards, and we studied PPTs and some word-processing applications.

原句时态混乱且词汇错误：既使用过去时又混入现在时（'was'与 'we have'），应全部使用过去时表述过去发生的事（had, taught, studied）。‘provide key boys’显然是词汇错误，应为'use keyboards'；‘worse aid applications’应为'word-processing applications'或'word processing applications'。此外，PPT常作复数（PPTs）或用'PowerPoint'。建议：叙述过去经历时统一用过去时，并注意常用词汇拼写与表达。

× I improve my typing by using the words to we. We. We use the word every day to finish our homework, to make some articles and with a lot of words to improve my typing.

✓ I improve my typing by using words. We use words every day to finish our homework, write articles, and with lots of practice I improve my typing.

原句中动名词和不定式使用混乱，重复冗余且结构不完整。‘by using the words to we’没有意义，应简化为‘by using words’或‘with practice’。列举并列动作时要用平行结构（finish homework, write articles）。建议：使用‘by + -ing’表示方式，保持并列部分的平行结构，并用明确的名词如'practice'说明提升方式。