Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid hesitations and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. 'scenery' instead of 'strain') and correct collocations like 'save the memory' → 'preserve the memory' or 'share it with friends'.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, when I visit a mountain or a beach, I take pictures to remember the atmosphere and later share them with friends, so we can talk about the trip.

Sugestão: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence stating your preference (or that you like both), then give specific contrasting details using linking words (for example, 'on the one hand...on the other hand...'). Avoid unclear words and pronunciation errors ('beef/peas' are incorrect). Use accurate vocabulary: 'vibrant city atmosphere', 'peaceful countryside', 'natural landscapes'.

Exemplo: I enjoy both, but for different reasons. On the one hand, urban views appeal to me because of the vibrant city atmosphere, interesting architecture and busy streets. On the other hand, I love rural views for their peacefulness, open fields and natural scenery, which are relaxing.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first (e.g. 'I like both') and then provide specific, coherent reasons with linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and incomplete ideas. Use correct phrases: 'in my country' not 'in my Vietnam', and describe features clearly (e.g. 'peaceful, natural landscapes' and 'cultural variety in other countries').

Exemplo: I like views both in my country and abroad. In Vietnam, I appreciate peaceful natural landscapes like rice terraces and beaches that feel familiar. In other countries, I enjoy different architectural styles and cultural scenes, which offer fresh perspectives and inspiration.

× Absolutely, when I have, when I have a chance to see some strain or some interesting view, I also want to capture it because I want to save the memory about it and I or or I just want to share, to show or to talk about it later with my friends.

✓ Absolutely, when I have a chance to see some strange or interesting view, I want to capture it because I want to save the memory of it or I just want to share or talk about it later with my friends.

The sentence contained several issues: 'strain' is likely a wrong word choice and should be 'strange' (or 'a striking/interesting view'); 'save the memory about it' is unnatural — use 'save the memory of it' or 'preserve the memory'; redundant fragments ('I or or I') create confusion; unnecessary repeated infinitives 'to show' and 'to talk' can be simplified. Corrections keep the present-tense meaning. Suggestion: choose appropriate vocabulary ('strange' or 'striking'), remove duplicates, and use natural prepositional expressions like 'memory of'. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I see both you have, umm, have is umm, unique characteristic, uh, for urban areas, I like the vibe of vibrant and uh, likely of a city.

✓ I see that both have unique characteristics. For urban areas, I like the vibrant vibe and the liveliness of the city.

The original has awkward phrasing and incorrect adjective order: 'vibe of vibrant' is incorrect; use 'vibrant vibe' or 'vibrant atmosphere'. 'Likely of a city' is incorrect choice — likely is an adverb/adjective not fitting here; 'liveliness' or 'energy' is appropriate. Also 'I see both you have' should be 'I see that both have' or 'Both have'. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases ('vibrant vibe', 'liveliness') and correct word order. Grammar problem type ID:13

× And for the rural areas, I like the beef. I like the peas and also the like, umm, the natural.

✓ For rural areas, I like the peace, the open spaces, and the natural environment.

The student likely meant 'peace' but said 'beef' and 'peas', which are incorrect words. These are vocabulary errors that affect meaning. 'the natural' is incomplete — use 'the natural environment' or 'nature'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns ('peace', 'open spaces', 'nature') and complete noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer both like in my Vietnam or they are in my Vietnam.

✓ I like both: views in Vietnam and views in other countries.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and uses incorrect pronouns ('they are in my Vietnam') and awkward structure. 'My Vietnam' is unnatural; use 'Vietnam' or 'my country, Vietnam'. Suggestion: restructure to parallel phrases ('views in Vietnam and views in other countries') and avoid incorrect pronouns. Grammar_problem_type_id:12

× The views give the vibe of peaceful, natural and in some people in interesting.

✓ The views give a peaceful, natural vibe, and some are interesting to people.

Adjective ordering and form are incorrect: 'vibe of peaceful, natural' should be 'a peaceful, natural vibe' or 'a peaceful and natural atmosphere'. 'in some people in interesting' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'some are interesting to people' or 'some people find them interesting'. Suggestion: use correct adjective order and clear clauses like 'some are interesting to people.' Grammar problem type ID:13

× For other country I like the.

✓ For other countries, I like the views there as well.

This fragment is incomplete and lacks the object; it's missing plural form 'countries' and a full clause. The sentence needs a noun and completion. Suggestion: complete the thought with 'I like the views in other countries as well' and use plural when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID:26