Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and correct verb forms (e.g., “I quite like taking photos,” “when I’m walking,” “every creature I see on the road”).

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I’m walking I often stop to photograph birds or interesting plants because I want to preserve the memory of the scene. Also, I like capturing the atmosphere of a place rather than just objects.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with clear reasons connected by linking words. Remove hesitations and correct sentence structure (e.g., ‘I prefer rural areas because I enjoy being surrounded by nature’). Provide one specific example of what you like in rural views to make your answer concrete.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy being surrounded by nature. For instance, I love the quiet mornings in the countryside when I can see mist over the fields and hear birdsong, which is much calmer than the busy noise of the city.

Sugestão: Give a clear statement and then support it with specific, fluent details. Fix grammar (e.g., ‘I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam is very beautiful’). Use linking words like ‘for example’ or ‘for instance’ and name concrete features (mountains, forests, coast) to strengthen your answer.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has stunning natural landscapes. For example, the country’s mountains, dense forests and scenic coastlines match my preference for nature, and these familiar places feel special to me.

× Guess I quite like taking photo.

✓ I guess I quite like taking photos.

Missing subject and incorrect noun form. Add the subject 'I' and use plural 'photos' after 'taking' because 'taking photos' is the standard collocation when referring to photographing multiple scenes. Also add 'I' for natural spoken structure.

× Uh, especially when I walking.

✓ Uh, especially when I am walking.

The verb 'walking' requires an auxiliary for the present continuous form. Use 'am walking' (subject + be + -ing) to form the correct progressive tense for actions happening around the present time.

× I enjoy to take photo every creature I see in the road, like three birds.

✓ I enjoy taking photos of every creature I see on the road, like three birds.

After 'enjoy' use the gerund form 'taking' not the infinitive 'to take'. Use plural 'photos' and the preposition 'of' to show what is photographed. Use 'on the road' rather than 'in the road' for typical English usage.

× I enjoy the environment and want to save memory.

✓ I enjoy the environment and want to preserve memories.

'Save memory' is unnatural in this context; the correct collocation is 'preserve memories'. 'Memory' (singular) and 'save' suggest computing context. Use plural 'memories' and the verb 'preserve'.

× I prefer a rural area because I am the one who enjoy, uh, the moment when I among, among the, umm, umm, among the natural, uh, So that's I, I don't like the hustle like in the open is.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I am someone who enjoys the moments when I am among nature. I don't like the hustle and bustle of the city.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('who enjoys'), incorrect or missing verb 'am' before 'among', incorrect noun phrase 'among the natural' should be 'among nature', and unclear ending. Rephrase for clarity and correct grammar: use plural 'rural areas' or keep 'a rural area' consistently, 'someone who enjoys' is natural, and 'hustle and bustle of the city' is the correct collocation.

× I prefer, uh, my view in my country because Vietnam is very beautiful country with mountain, with the, uh, jungle, uh, many, many thing alike with my preference, uh, that surround by, uh, nature.

✓ I prefer the scenery in my country because Vietnam is a very beautiful country with mountains, jungles, and many things that I like, surrounded by nature.

Missing and incorrect articles: use 'the scenery' or 'views' and 'a very beautiful country'. Plurals 'mountains' and 'jungles' are appropriate. 'Many things that I like' is clearer than 'many, many thing alike with my preference'. Use 'surrounded by nature' for correct participle phrase.