Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct grammar (singular/plural and word choice), and add a specific example. Use one or two linking words if you add detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like capturing landscapes, such as mountains or beaches, because photos help me remember moments and share them with friends. For example, last month I took a picture of a sunrise over the river that reminded me of a peaceful holiday.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement and reduce hesitations; use correct adjectives and linking words to explain reasons and give a specific detail. Replace vague words (‘they’re the scenario’) with precise descriptions.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because the natural scenery is more appealing. For instance, I like photographing quiet fields and forests since the light and colors there are calmer and more photogenic than busy city streets.

Sugestão: Answer directly, fix grammar (use present perfect for travel experience), avoid repetition, and provide a clear preference with a brief reason and an example or possibility for the future. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but'.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't travelled abroad yet. However, when I see photos from other countries on social media, I find them very beautiful and I would like to visit them in the future to take my own pictures.

× Yeah, I would like to take picture of uh, different views, uh, because taking picture is uh, a part of amazement and it will help me uh, to capture some good things umm, such as natures or anything, uh, to my phone, which will be great.

✓ Yeah, I would like to take pictures of different views, because taking pictures is part of the enjoyment and it helps me capture good things, such as nature, on my phone, which is great.

Errors: incorrect use of singular/plural 'picture' (should be plural when general), awkward gerund phrase 'taking picture is a part of amazement' and article misuse. The main grammar type here is use of nouns with -ing (gerund) and plural forms. Suggestion: use plural 'pictures' for general activities; use 'taking pictures' as a gerund phrase followed by a clear noun 'enjoyment' instead of 'amazement'; use 'helps' for present tense habitual action; use 'nature' as an uncountable noun and 'on my phone' for location.

× Uh, I prefer most, uh, rural areas because, uh, they're the scenario and the nature is great.

✓ I mostly prefer rural areas because the scenery and the nature are great.

Errors: 'prefer most' is awkward; 'they're the scenario' misuses plural pronoun and incorrect noun 'scenario' vs 'scenery'; subject-verb number with 'nature' (uncountable) and 'scenery' (singular). Classified as singular/plural issue. Suggestion: say 'I mostly prefer rural areas' and use 'the scenery is great' or combine as 'the scenery and nature are great.' Use 'scenery' not 'scenario.'

× Umm, basically I like to take picture of nature and, uh, there I find the nature very calm, quite and photogenic.

✓ Basically I like to take pictures of nature, and there I find the natural environment very calm, quiet, and photogenic.

Errors: singular/plural 'picture' should be plural; adjective choice and order: 'very calm, quite' ('quite' incorrectly used as adjective) and repetition 'the nature' awkward. Classified under verb + -ing (gerund) and adjective use. Suggestion: use 'take pictures of nature'; use 'calm' and 'quiet' (adjectives) and 'natural environment' for clarity; maintain parallel adjective list 'calm, quiet, and photogenic.'

× This is so much difficult because I never been to other countries or or overseas.

✓ This is very difficult because I have never been to other countries or overseas.

Errors: incorrect past tense/auxiliary: 'I never been' should use present perfect 'I have never been' for life experience. Classified as past tense issue. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences up to now; use 'very difficult' rather than 'so much difficult.'

× So mainly now I like to prefer the use in my country, but when I see through social media in in other countries that is so much beautiful and I would like to.

✓ So for now I prefer to do that in my country, but when I see other countries on social media they look so beautiful, and I would like to visit them.

Errors: pronoun/reference problems ('the use' unclear), repetition 'in in', incorrect clause 'that is so much beautiful' and sentence fragment 'I would like to.' Classified as incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure. Suggestion: clarify intent: 'prefer to do that in my country'; use 'other countries on social media' and correctly refer to 'they' or 'they look' and complete the idea with 'visit them.'