Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more grammatically correct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and article usage, and avoid redundancy. Use a linking phrase to add a brief supporting detail or example. Aim for 2–4 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., "photogenic" instead of "photographic person").

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. I consider myself quite photogenic and I have hundreds of photos on my phone. For example, when I walk with friends I often ask them to take my picture because I enjoy capturing moments and different backgrounds.

Sugestão: Clarify your preference and use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid filler words and numbers that don't fit. If you like both, state that clearly and give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "Firstly... Secondly..."). Use correct comparative language and accurate nouns.

Exemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views for different reasons. Firstly, urban areas offer dramatic architecture and lively streets that make interesting photos. Secondly, rural areas provide peaceful landscapes and beautiful sunsets that are perfect for natural shots.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid awkward phrasing. Give a clear reason for your preference and support it with a specific, relevant detail. Avoid mentioning social media as the only reason unless you explain why it matters (e.g., discovering new cultures). Use correct modal verbs and infinitive forms.

Exemplo: I would prefer to take photos in other countries because I want to explore new landscapes and cultures. Since I already have many photos of my own country, traveling abroad would give me fresh subjects and new perspectives to capture.

× I can say I am very photographic person because in my phone I have like 100 pictures of mine and I really into taking pictures.

✓ I can say I am a very photographic person because on my phone I have about 100 pictures of myself and I am really into taking pictures.

Errors: missing article before 'very photographic person' (use 'a'), wrong preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone', colloquial 'like 100' better as 'about 100', wrong pronoun 'pictures of mine' better 'pictures of myself', and missing verb 'am' before 'really into'. Suggestion: add the article 'a', replace 'in' with 'on', use 'about' for approximate numbers, use reflexive pronoun 'myself' for pictures of the speaker, and include 'am' with 'really into'.

× For example, when I'm walking with my friend, I always persuaded them take the photo me and then I really enjoy it.

✓ For example, when I'm walking with my friends, I always persuade them to take a photo of me, and then I really enjoy it.

Errors: 'friend' number mismatch with 'them' (use 'friends'), wrong verb tense 'persuaded' should be present 'persuade' for habitual action, missing 'to' in the infinitive 'to take', incorrect order 'take the photo me' should be 'take a photo of me'. Suggestion: use plural 'friends' or match pronoun, use present simple for habitual actions, include 'to' before verb, and use 'of me' for object of the photo.

× I prefer both beers.

✓ I prefer both.

Errors: 'beers' is incorrect and irrelevant here; likely intended 'areas' or simply 'both'. Suggestion: remove 'beers' and say 'I prefer both' or 'I like both urban and rural areas' to be clear.

× First 3 urban areas is like crazy have a crazy views like every person like take a photo with urban areas including myself.

✓ First, urban areas have crazy, interesting views; many people, including myself, like to take photos there.

Errors: 'First 3' is unclear, subject-verb agreement and structure issues, 'is like crazy have a crazy views' is ungrammatical, incorrect plural 'a crazy views', and awkward 'take a photo with urban areas'. Suggestion: simplify: 'urban areas have crazy, interesting views', ensure subject-verb agreement ('areas have'), use plural/singular forms correctly, and say 'take photos there'.

× But secondly rural areas is too amazing to take a photo like third half a beautiful sunset.

✓ But secondly, rural areas are also amazing for taking photos, especially at sunset when the views are beautiful.

Errors: missing commas, subject-verb agreement 'rural areas is' should be 'rural areas are', awkward phrase 'too amazing to take a photo', incorrect fragment 'like third half a beautiful sunset'. Suggestion: use 'also amazing for taking photos', correct plural verb, and clarify 'especially at sunset'.

× I definitely would rather to choose another country because I always wanted to visit another country to take a photo in the posting on Instagram so every person like it including myself and why don't I choose my country because I have so many photos with my country and I want to try another.

✓ I would definitely rather choose another country because I have always wanted to visit other countries to take photos to post on Instagram; everyone, including me, likes that. I don't choose my country because I already have so many photos of it and I want to try somewhere new.

Errors: incorrect use of 'would rather to choose' (should be 'would rather choose' or 'prefer to choose'), tense inconsistency 'always wanted' vs present preference (use 'have always wanted'), awkward 'to take a photo in the posting on Instagram' should be 'to take photos to post on Instagram', 'every person like it' needs subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing 'everyone likes it', and 'photos with my country' should be 'photos of my country'. Suggestion: use 'would rather' + base verb, use present perfect for past desire with present relevance, rephrase for clarity and correct prepositions.