Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Simplify and correct grammar, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetitions and filler words (umm, and). Use linking words for coherence (for example, also). Keep to maximum five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of natural views. For example, I often photograph mountains, forests and the sea because I like capturing different textures and colours. I usually use my phone to take these photos because it is convenient and always with me.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference statement, then support it with specific reasons and one example. Improve grammar (I prefer rural areas; they make me feel calm) and use linking words (because, for instance). Keep sentences concise and avoid awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas to urban ones because they are closer to nature. For instance, I enjoy looking at wide skies, seas and forests, as these scenes make me feel calm and relaxed. Also, rural views are less crowded, which helps me to unwind.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then explain why with a specific example and add a contrasting point about foreign views. Correct grammar and word choice (they are familiar and meaningful; I also appreciate views abroad). Use linking words (for example, however).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and meaningful to me. For example, seeing the mountains near my hometown always brings back childhood memories. However, I also appreciate views abroad for their different landscapes and cultural atmosphere.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of difference meals such as umm in the mountains or the sea and and you have like a forest, trees, jungles in the park.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes, such as in the mountains, the sea, or forests and jungles in parks.

The gerund/infinitive issue: after 'like' the verb should be in the -ing form (taking), not the infinitive 'to taking' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). Also 'difference meals' is incorrect word choice and plural form; 'different scenes' fits context. Remove duplicate 'and' and reorder items for clarity. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' and list nouns separated by commas. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8

× Any of the natures will I like the most in the natural view, So I'll I'll usually take the photo from my phones.

✓ I like natural scenery the most, so I usually take photos with my phone.

Awkward adjective/noun usage: 'any of the natures' and 'natural view' are incorrect collocations; use 'natural scenery'. Word order and extra filler words ('will I', duplicated 'I'll') create sentence structure errors but primary issue is incorrect adjectives/nouns (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Also 'phones' should be singular 'phone' for one device. Suggestion: use concise subject-verb-object order and correct collocations. Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

× What are people view in rural area which connected to net more closer to nature And I like the view that such as the sky, seas, the forests, trees.

✓ People's views in rural areas are more connected to nature, and I like views such as the sky, the sea, and forests and trees.

Pronoun and possessive errors: 'What are people view' is ungrammatical; use possessive 'people's views' or 'views of people'. Also 'rural area' needs plural 'areas' for general meaning. The sentence mixes subjects and needs clearer noun phrases (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Suggestion: use possessive forms and pluralize when speaking generally, and list items with correct articles. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× I would like prefer more on the natures because they feel they make me feel calm and relaxed while I've take on this kind.

✓ I prefer natural places because they make me feel calm and relaxed when I take photos of them.

Tense and verb form errors: 'I would like prefer' is redundant and incorrect; choose 'I prefer'. 'The natures' is incorrect noun form; use 'natural places'. 'I've take' uses incorrect past participle; correct is 'I take' for habitual action or 'I have taken' for present perfect (Grammar Problem Type ID 5 and 9). Suggestion: use simple present for preferences and habitual actions and correct participle forms. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× Well, I prefer the view in my own country because they are families and meaningful to me.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and meaningful to me.

Pronoun and word choice: 'they are families' is incorrect; likely intended 'familiar'. 'View' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. This is primarily misuse of pronouns/word choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Suggestion: choose correct adjective 'familiar' and match singular/plural nouns. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× For example umm seeing the mountains near my hometowns that brings brings back childhood memory.

✓ For example, seeing the mountains near my hometown brings back childhood memories.

Redundant words ('brings brings'), incorrect pluralization 'hometowns' vs 'hometown' depending on meaning, and noun number 'memory' should be plural 'memories'. This is a sentence structure and agreement issue (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 and 1). Suggestion: remove duplicates, use singular or plural consistently, and pluralize 'memories' for multiple recollections. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× However, I will pre also appreciate some any others view from overseas for their cultures.

✓ However, I also appreciate views from overseas because of their cultures.

Several pronoun and word choice issues: 'I will pre also' is garbled; should be 'I also appreciate'. 'some any others view' is incorrect; use 'views from overseas'. 'their cultures' is acceptable but follow with a reason connector. This is primarily incorrect use of pronouns and determiners (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Suggestion: simplify to 'I also appreciate overseas views because of their cultures.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 12