Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is not a proper response to the question. It repeats words and contains grammatical errors and mispronunciations (e.g., “pink” instead of “taking”). To improve: respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details. Use correct verb forms and simple vocabulary if needed. For example, start with “Yes, I like taking pictures of different views,” then add why and a short example. Keep it to 1–3 sentences, and use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

Exemplo: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing interesting scenes. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines when I walk in the evening.

Sugestão: The reply is a question rather than an answer and repeats the examiner’s phrasing. You should answer directly (e.g., state a preference), then give a reason and one brief specific detail. Use linking words such as “because,” “so,” or “for example.” Also correct grammar: use “I prefer” not “Do you prefer.”

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more natural. For example, I like photographing fields and mountains where there is less noise and more open space.

Sugestão: Again, the student repeats the examiner’s question instead of answering. Give a clear statement of preference, then justify it with one specific reason and, if possible, a short example. Use correct word choice (views, not viewers) and grammar (others → other). Keep answers concise and cohesive with linking words like “because” or “although.”

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes. For example, I enjoyed photographing ancient temples and coastal cliffs when I traveled abroad last year.

× I do you like pink picture of a different views?

✓ I do like pictures of different views.

The student used incorrect pronouns and word order. 'I do you like' is ungrammatical; correct affirmative emphasis is 'I do like' or simply 'I like'. 'pink picture' seems unrelated to the question and likely should be 'pictures'. Also 'a different views' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'views'; use 'pictures of different views' or 'a different view'. Suggestion: remove 'you', use 'I like' and match singular/plural consistently. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Do you prefer because in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ I prefer urban areas to rural areas.

The student repeated the question structure and included the conjunction 'because' incorrectly, producing an incomplete sentence. The examiner asked for preference; a clear answer uses 'I prefer X to Y' or 'I prefer X rather than Y'. Suggestion: remove 'because' unless giving a reason, and use the correct comparative structure 'prefer X to Y'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Do you prefer viewers in your own country or in others countries?

✓ I prefer views in my own country to those in other countries.

The student used 'Do you prefer' (question form) instead of answering and used 'viewers' (incorrect noun) and 'others countries' (wrong determiner and plural form). Correctly, 'views' is the intended noun, 'my' rather than 'your' when speaking about personal preference, and 'other countries' (not 'others countries'). When comparing, use 'prefer X to Y' or 'prefer X to those in Y'. Suggestion: use 'my own country' and 'other countries', and use 'those' to refer back to 'views'. Grammar problem type ID:12