Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and sentence clarity. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and add a brief reason or example with a linking word. For instance, say you enjoy photographing nature because it captures memories and lifts your mood, and give one short example.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, especially of natural scenery because it helps me capture memories. For example, last month I photographed a mountain sunrise, and I look at those photos when I feel stressed because they cheer me up.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure: start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing like "I quite fond of"; use "I'm quite fond of" or "I prefer". Mention specific features you like (e.g., quiet, fresh air) to make it more concrete.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I'm quite fond of natural places. For example, I love watching sunrises and sunsets among trees since the quiet atmosphere and fresh air help me relax.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and complete. Begin with a direct statement, then explain with clear, specific reasons and one concise example. Avoid hesitations and repeated phrases. Correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer views in my own country"), and finish your thought without trailing off.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they are tied to personal memories. For example, many coastal towns I visited as a child remind me of family trips, so when I see those landscapes I feel nostalgic and comforted.

× I just can't stop myself to taking picture of it to make memory.

✓ I just can't stop myself from taking a picture of it to make a memory.

This sentence uses an incorrect verb pattern. 'Can't stop myself' is followed by 'from' + gerund, not 'to' + present participle. Also 'taking picture' needs an article and 'make memory' should be 'make a memory' or 'create a memory.' Suggestion: use 'can't stop myself from taking a picture' and include appropriate articles.

× I really enjoy watching the pictures whenever I feel very bored, it's make me very happy.

✓ I really enjoy looking at the pictures whenever I feel very bored; they make me very happy.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'watching the pictures' is an unnatural collocation—'looking at' or 'viewing' is better. The comma splice should be fixed by a semicolon or separate sentence. 'It's make me' mixes singular subject with plural verb and wrong tense; 'they make me' agrees with 'the pictures.' Also avoid 'very' twice. Suggestion: use 'I really enjoy looking at the pictures whenever I feel bored; they make me very happy.'

× I prefer views in rural areas because I quite fond of natural place.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I'm quite fond of natural places.

The sentence omits the verb 'be' before 'quite fond' and uses singular 'place' where the plural 'places' fits the general meaning. Also 'I'm' is needed for correct grammar. Suggestion: include the verb 'am' and use plural 'places' or 'the natural environment.'

× I enjoy what watching sunset, sunrise surrounded by trees.

✓ I enjoy watching sunsets and sunrises surrounded by trees.

The phrase 'enjoy what watching' is incorrect; 'enjoy watching' is the correct verb + -ing pattern. Also use plural 'sunsets and sunrises' for general preference and include 'and' between them. Suggestion: say 'I enjoy watching sunsets and sunrises surrounded by trees.'

× I really enjoy green sceneries.

✓ I really enjoy green scenery.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun when referring to landscape in general, so using plural 'sceneries' is incorrect. Use 'green scenery' or 'green landscapes.' Suggestion: replace with 'green scenery' or 'green landscapes.'

× I really prefer view in my own country because there are it's not about just places, it's about personal feelings.

✓ I really prefer views in my own country because it's not just about places; it's about personal feelings.

Use plural 'views' or include an article 'a view.' Also the clause 'there are it's not about just places' is incorrect and redundant. The corrected version removes 'there are' and fixes word order 'not just about places.' Suggestion: use 'I prefer views in my own country because it's not just about places; it's about personal feelings.'

× Umm, for example, I had I had talked a lot of trips.

✓ Umm, for example, I took a lot of trips.

The original 'I had I had talked a lot of trips' is ungrammatical. 'Talked trips' is incorrect collocation. Use simple past 'I took a lot of trips' or 'I have taken many trips' depending on context. Suggestion: use 'I took a lot of trips' to refer to past experiences.

× So whenever I visit a place, it's.

✓ So whenever I visit a place, I remember those times.

The sentence is incomplete: 'it's' needs an object or complement. To convey the intended meaning about memories, complete the clause with 'I remember those times' or 'it brings back memories.' Suggestion: finish the thought with a clear clause such as 'it brings back memories.'