Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by two supporting details. Avoid filler words and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'in the beach nature' → 'of beaches and natural scenery'). Use one linking word to connect ideas (e.g., 'and' or 'also').

Exemplo: Yes — I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially beaches and natural landscapes. I often make collages to highlight colour and composition, and sometimes I create short photo documentaries to tell a visual story.

Sugestão: Start with a direct preference (urban or rural) then give two clear reasons. Remove hesitations and duplicate words, correct grammar (e.g., 'in a urban area' → 'in an urban area'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect reasons. Be specific about what urban features you like.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I live in a city and there is a lot of visual variety. For example, modern architecture and busy streets provide interesting photo subjects, and technology-related scenes—like people using gadgets—are relevant to my teaching work.

Sugestão: Answer directly whether you prefer local or foreign views, then explain why with specific examples. Eliminate hesitations and vague phrases (avoid repeating 'umm' and 'different'). Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' and provide concrete details (e.g., architecture, food markets, cultural festivals).

Exemplo: I like views from other countries because they expose me to different cultures and lifestyles. For example, I enjoy photographing street markets, traditional architecture, and local festivals, which are quite different from what I see at home.

× Actually yes, I love taking pictures of the views especially in the beach nature and I like also doing a collage of it and also documentaries.

✓ Actually, yes. I love taking pictures of views, especially at the beach and in natural settings, and I also like making collages and documentaries.

Multiple preposition and phrase choice errors: 'in the beach nature' is incorrect; use 'at the beach' and 'in natural settings'. 'Doing a collage of it' is awkward; use 'making collages'. Also added commas and conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: learn common collocations with locations (at the beach, in nature) and verbs (make a collage, make a documentary).

× Since I'm in a urban area, I prepare UMM taking pictures in urban since more more of the place is here is advantage especially in technology.

✓ Since I'm in an urban area, I usually take pictures in the city because many advantages related to technology are here.

Errors: 'a urban' should be 'an urban' (article before vowel sound). The sentence also has awkward phrasing and repetition ('UMM', 'more more', 'the place is here is advantage'). Rewrote to maintain meaning: 'usually take pictures in the city because many advantages related to technology are here.' Suggestion: use 'a' vs 'an' based on sound; remove filler words and redundant phrases; use clear connectors like 'because' to show reason.

× I like seeing a different kinds of gadgets that I used for my umm teaching profession.

✓ I like seeing different kinds of gadgets that I use for my teaching profession.

Error: 'a different kinds' is wrong; 'different' should not be preceded by 'a' when followed by plural 'kinds'. Tense mismatch: 'used' should be 'use' to match present habit. Also removed filler 'umm'. Suggestion: match singular/plural and ensure verb tense reflects habitual actions (use present simple for habitual uses).

× Umm, I believe that anyone would love umm views from different countries, especially when you explore different cultures.

✓ I believe that people would love views from different countries, especially when they explore different cultures.

'Anyone would love umm views' is awkward; 'people' is more natural. Pronoun consistency: 'you explore' should match 'people' => 'they explore'. Also removed filler 'umm'. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent and choose neutral nouns ('people') when speaking generally.

× Umm, different, umm different people, the way they live, no the country as well as the technologies, something like that.

✓ Different people, the way they live, the country, and the technologies are all interesting, something like that.

Original fragment is ungrammatical and contains pronoun/structure issues ('no the country' unclear). Converted fragments into a grammatical list with parallel structure: 'Different people, the way they live, the country, and the technologies are all interesting.' Suggestion: when listing items, keep parallel grammatical forms and avoid fillers; ensure each list element fits the same grammatical category.