Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên và rõ ràng bằng cách trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ lí do kèm ví dụ cụ thể. Chú ý dùng liên từ để nối ý và sửa ngữ pháp như “keep” thành “keeps” hay diễn đạt đúng ý (ví dụ: keep memories). Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và tránh từ thừa như “photograph pictures”.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I love photography because beautiful landscapes help me capture memories. For example, when I see a sunset over the sea, I often take several shots to remember the colors and atmosphere.

Sugestão: Tránh lặp ý và hoàn thiện cấu trúc câu. Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để nối câu và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “feel close to” nên có tân ngữ (e.g., “feel close to them/it”).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up there and they feel familiar. The open fields and quiet villages remind me of home, so I find them more relaxing than busy city scenes.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng và có chi tiết cụ thể. Để tốt hơn, trả lời trực tiếp về “own country” vs “other countries” trong một câu chủ đề, rồi nêu lý do ngắn gọn và ví dụ liên kết. Tránh tiếng lắp (uh) và dùng từ chính xác (e.g., “countryside” thay vì chỉ “fields” nếu muốn nói chung).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because the countryside feels familiar and peaceful. For instance, the green fields and fresh air near my hometown help me unwind after a busy week and remind me of family gatherings.

× 1st I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

✓ First, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

'1st' is an informal numeral abbreviation not suitable at the start of a spoken answer; use 'First' as a discourse marker. This is not a verb error but a wording/order issue; replace numeral with the word 'First' to sound natural.

× I love photographs so whenever I see the beautiful sceneries, I often photograph pictures because it's kept.

✓ I love photographs, so whenever I see beautiful scenery I often take pictures to keep them.

'Sceneries' is rarely used; use the uncountable noun 'scenery'. 'Photograph pictures' is redundant — use 'take pictures'. 'Because it's kept' is ungrammatical; use 'to keep them' to express purpose. Also add a comma after 'photographs' for clarity.

× Pictures can make me feel like more.

✓ Pictures can make me feel better.

'Feel like more' is incorrect collocation. Use the adjective 'better' to indicate improved feeling. Keep verb 'make' + object + adjective structure: 'make me feel better'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up there and I feel close to.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up there and feel close to them.

'Feel close to' requires an object; 'there' is location, but when referring back to 'views' use 'them'. Alternatively omit 'to' and say 'feel close to that place'. Add a clear object for the preposition.

× And I feel close to there.

✓ And I feel close to it.

'Close to there' is unidiomatic. Use 'close to it' when referring to a place (the countryside) or 'I feel close to that place'. Use appropriate pronoun after 'to'.

× I prefer fields in rural areas, uh because I grew up there and the countryside feels familiar and peaceful.

✓ I prefer the fields in rural areas because I grew up there and the countryside feels familiar and peaceful.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'fields' to specify the type of views being referred to. This makes the sentence more natural and specific in context.

× I especially enjoy the green fields and fresh air, which help me relax after a busy week.

✓ I especially enjoy the green fields and the fresh air, which help me relax after a busy week.

Add the article 'the' before 'fresh air' for parallel structure with 'the green fields'. This improves sentence balance and clarity.