Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and focused. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. “I love being pretty” is ambiguous here). Use precise vocabulary like scenery, composition, textures, or architecture.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I like capturing interesting scenery and unique structures. For example, I often shoot city skylines to capture architectural details, and coastal landscapes to highlight colours and textures.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with specific, coherent details using linking words. Mention concrete examples of what you like about rural views (e.g. fields, mountains, traditional buildings) and explain why they appeal to you emotionally or artistically. Avoid vague phrases like “different unique structure.”

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery is more peaceful and varied. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and rivers, which help me relax and provide interesting natural shapes and textures for my photos.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add one or two specific reasons with examples. Use linking words (for example, moreover) and precise vocabulary (coastlines, mountain ranges, limestone formations). Explain briefly what makes those views special compared to other countries.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, the Philippines, because it offers diverse landscapes like white-sand beaches and dramatic mountain ranges. For example, the limestone cliffs and turquoise waters of Palawan provide striking compositions that I rarely see elsewhere.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I love being pretty and besides and it has different views, has a lot of different structure.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I enjoy the variety and the many different structures.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect conjunctions ('and besides and') and unclear phrasing ('I love being pretty' is irrelevant) causing sentence structure errors (ID 16 and 26). Replace redundant parts with a concise phrase ('enjoy the variety') and use a clear noun phrase ('many different structures'). Avoid unrelated clauses to keep the answer coherent.

× Well, I prefer in rural areas because it has a beautiful scenery and it makes me relax and also it has a different unique structure and landforms.

✓ Well, I prefer rural areas because they have beautiful scenery, they help me relax, and they have unique structures and landforms.

The original uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to plural 'rural areas', causing subject-verb agreement errors (ID 27). Also 'a beautiful scenery' is incorrect: 'scenery' is uncountable and should not take 'a'. Rephrase using plural pronouns 'they' and correct articles: 'beautiful scenery' and 'unique structures and landforms'.

× Well, I prefer my views in our country which is in the Philippines because it has a lot of beaches and also mountain ranges.

✓ I prefer the views in our country, the Philippines, because it has many beaches and mountain ranges.

The phrase 'my views in our country' is awkward and 'which is in the Philippines' is unnecessary; this is a pronoun/phrase usage problem (ID 12) and article/structure issue (ID 22). Replace with 'the views in our country, the Philippines' for clarity. Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' for a more formal response and no article before 'mountain ranges'.

× It has a unique landforms and also it has a beautiful scenery.

✓ It has unique landforms and beautiful scenery.

The original mixes singular 'a unique' with plural 'landforms' causing an article/plural mismatch (ID 22) and repeats 'it has' unnecessarily which affects fluency (ID 13). Remove the article and combine ideas: 'unique landforms and beautiful scenery.'