Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–4 short sentences and mention a concrete example or reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset because the light makes the buildings look warm and dramatic. Even in bad weather, like rain, I try to capture reflections or moody skies to make the pictures interesting.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Fix tense and phrasing mistakes (e.g., “I love nature,” “it makes me feel relaxed”). Limit to 2–3 sentences and include a concrete detail or brief example to strengthen your answer.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I love nature and it helps me feel relaxed. For instance, walking beside a quiet river and photographing wildflowers makes me feel more creative than when I’m in a busy city.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and vocabulary. State your preference then give specific examples and use linking words like “for example” or “such as.” Avoid vague phrases and repeat fewer words. Keep the response to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because China is very diverse. For example, I can photograph coastal beaches in the east and snowy mountains in the west, so I rarely run out of new landscapes to capture.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views on everywhere I go to a new place I would use my photos to take pictures.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views everywhere I go. When I visit a new place, I take photos.

The sentence misuses prepositions and repeats 'take pictures' unnecessarily. 'On everywhere' is incorrect; use 'everywhere' alone. Also complex clause should be split: 'When I visit a new place, I take photos.' Use simple present for habitual actions and the -ing form 'taking' is correct as a gerund after 'like'. Suggestion: Use 'everywhere I go' for location expressions and split long sentences into clearer clauses.

× Sometimes it may it was sunny or rainy and with different.

✓ Sometimes it is sunny or rainy and the weather can be different.

This fragment mixes tenses and lacks a clear subject and verb. 'May it was' is incorrect. Use present simple for general statements: 'Sometimes it is sunny or rainy.' To express variability, add 'the weather can be different.' Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and include subject+verb; avoid combining modal 'may' with past 'was'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I loved nature and I think nature is made me more creative and feeling relaxed so I would love to stay in rural area.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love nature and I think nature makes me more creative and feel relaxed, so I would love to stay in a rural area.

Tense and verb form errors: 'I loved' should be present 'I love' to match 'I prefer' and 'I think'. 'Is made me' is ungrammatical; use active present 'nature makes me'. 'Feeling relaxed' should be base verb 'feel relaxed' after 'makes me'. Also add article 'a' before 'rural area'. Suggestion: Keep verbs in the same timeframe and use correct verb forms after causative verbs (makes me + base verb).

× I prefer using my own countries because China is huge and there's a different views types of views.

✓ I prefer using my own country because China is huge and there are different types of views.

'Own countries' should be singular 'own country' when referring to the speaker's country. 'There's' (there is) is singular and does not agree with the plural noun; use 'there are'. The phrase 'different views types of views' is redundant and incorrectly ordered; use 'different types of views'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'there is/are' and use correct noun number and word order for compound nouns.

× In China you can see the beach views, the mountain views, all different kinds of.

✓ In China you can see beach views, mountain views and many other kinds.

The original ends abruptly with 'all different kinds of' which is incomplete. Also unnecessary definite articles before plural categories: use 'beach views' and 'mountain views' without 'the'. Complete the list with 'and many other kinds' or 'and many others.' Suggestion: Avoid trailing prepositional fragments; finish lists and use articles appropriately for plural nouns.