Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms (e.g., "I enjoy photographing"), and avoid unclear phrases. Use one or two linking words to add a specific detail (e.g., why mountains appeal to you) and keep the answer within 3–4 concise sentences. For instance, correct word choice (sunrise from a ridge) and remove confusing fragments.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially mountain landscapes. I find mountains dramatic and peaceful, and I like capturing sunrises from a ridge because the light and colors change quickly. For example, last month I photographed a sunrise that turned the peaks golden, which made the scene unforgettable.

Sugestão: Focus on clear, grammatically correct sentences and give a specific reason with an example. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'for example') correctly and avoid repetition. Replace vague phrases like 'breathe clue clearly' with precise expressions such as 'breathe fresh air'. Keep to 2–3 sentences and include one specific detail showing why rural views appeal to you.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy being surrounded by nature and fresh air. For example, walking by a quiet lake or through a pine forest helps me relax and notice small details like birds and flowers. Therefore, rural scenery feels more peaceful than busy city views.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and correct grammar: use 'prefer views' not 'prefer few', correct verb forms ('I love mountain views'). State a clear preference and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so') to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences and mention a concrete example of a local place.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I love our mountain landscapes. For example, the Blue Ridge range near my hometown has many scenic trails and viewpoints where the peaks and valleys are stunning. So I usually choose local mountains for photography rather than traveling abroad.

× I especially enjoy photographing mountain views because they are my favorite and this scenery is so dramatic and the atmosphere feels peaceful.

✓ I especially enjoy photographing mountain views because they are my favorite; the scenery is dramatic and the atmosphere feels peaceful.

The sentence mixes plural 'mountain views' with singular 'this scenery' awkwardly. Use consistent references: 'the scenery' without 'this' or rephrase. Also use a semicolon or conjunction to connect two independent clauses. Suggestion: keep noun references consistent and join clauses clearly.

× For example, I want photograph a sunrise from a Ridge where you like.

✓ For example, I want to photograph a sunrise from a ridge that you like.

Missing 'to' before the base verb: 'want to photograph'. 'Ridge' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'Where you like' is ungrammatical; use 'that you like' to modify 'ridge' or 'that you like to visit'. Suggestion: use 'want to' + verb and correct relative clause.

× I do prefer views in rural areas because I love being surrounded by nature.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love being surrounded by nature.

'I do prefer' is grammatically possible but unnecessary; simpler present simple 'I prefer' is more natural. No article error here; however original later sentence contains article issues (next suggestions). Suggestion: use concise present simple for preferences.

× I love the atmosphere in the rural because the nature and we can breathe clue clearly and.

✓ I love the atmosphere in the countryside because of the nature and we can breathe clearly.

'the rural' is incorrect; use 'the countryside' or 'rural areas'. 'Because the nature' should be 'because of the nature' or simply 'because of nature'. 'breathe clue clearly and' is ungrammatical: 'breathe clearly' is correct. Remove trailing conjunction. Suggestion: use 'the countryside' and 'because of nature' and correct adverb placement.

× I prefer few in my own country because I loves Mountain View so I would prefer in my own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I love mountain views, so I would prefer to stay in my own country.

'few' is incorrect here; use 'views' or 'a few' depending on meaning. 'loves' should be 'love' to match first-person subject (subject-verb agreement). 'Mountain View' capitalization is inconsistent; use 'mountain views' as plural. Also 'prefer in my own country' needs 'prefer to stay in' or 'prefer them in'. Suggestion: use correct number words and match verb to subject.

× There are so many beautiful few mountain.

✓ There are so many beautiful mountains.

'few mountain' mixes plural and singular; use plural 'mountains'. Remove 'few' unless 'a few' is intended: 'There are a few beautiful mountains' or emphasize quantity with 'so many'. Suggestion: choose 'so many mountains' or 'a few mountains' appropriately and ensure noun and quantifier agree.

× I loves Mountain View so I would prefer in my own country.

✓ I love mountain views, so I would prefer my own country.

'loves' is third-person singular; with subject 'I' use 'love'. Also 'Mountain View' should be 'mountain views' (plural, common noun). 'prefer in my own country' is awkward; better 'prefer my own country' or 'prefer to stay in my own country'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and use natural phrasing for preference.