Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: remove filler words (uh), correct grammar (use 'those views' or 'the views') and give one specific reason or example. Keep it within 1–3 sentences. Use a clear topic sentence followed by a brief detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy visiting new places and photographing the views because I like capturing unique landscapes and the light at different times of day, for example, the way sunrise brightens a mountain valley.

Sugestão: Correct sentence structure and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence (I prefer rural views), then give two specific reasons connected with examples. Remove extra prepositions and improve phrasing (e.g., 'a connection with nature').

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they allow me to feel a stronger connection with nature; for example, I enjoy hiking to viewpoints where I can see forests and rivers without city noise.

Sugestão: Avoid fillers and repetition, and make the link between preference and reason explicit. Give a concise topic sentence then one specific supporting detail (a place or scene) to illustrate your point.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its landscapes and people; for instance, I enjoy visiting coastal towns at sunset where local culture and scenery combine.

× Yes I do, uh, I really enjoy going to new places and taking pictures, uh, from that views.

✓ Yes, I do. I really enjoy going to new places and taking pictures of those views.

The phrase 'from that views' is incorrect. 'Of' is the correct preposition to link 'taking pictures' with the thing photographed (preposition error -> type 11) and 'that views' mixes singular demonstrative 'that' with plural 'views'; it should be 'those views' (singular/plural error -> type 1). Use 'taking pictures of those views' to be grammatically correct and natural.

× I prefer view in. I prefer views in rural areas because I really want to have a connection with the nature and generally I enjoy more with the nature.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I really want to have a connection with nature, and generally I enjoy being with nature more.

Multiple errors: 'I prefer view in.' is incomplete and 'view' should be plural 'views' to match context (singular/plural error -> type 1). 'the nature' incorrectly uses the definite article; 'nature' as an uncountable general concept usually appears without 'the' (article error -> type 22). 'I enjoy more with the nature' is ungrammatical: the verb 'enjoy' should directly take the activity or noun without 'with', and word order for 'more' is awkward. Use 'enjoy being with nature more' or 'enjoy nature more' (sentence structure/adverb placement -> types 26 and 20).

× I love my country, uh, and I feel more connected with, with people in my country. So that's why I want to visit more places in my country and see the views there.

✓ I love my country, and I feel more connected with the people there. That's why I want to visit more places in my country and see the views.

Repetition 'with, with' is disfluent and should be a single 'with' (sentence structure -> type 26). 'people in my country' is wordy; using 'the people there' is clearer and avoids repeating 'my country' immediately (pronoun use -> type 12). Ending with 'see the views there' can drop the redundant 'there' if 'the people there' already established location; simplified as 'see the views' or keep one 'there' for clarity. The corrections improve pronoun reference and reduce redundancy.