Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 발음, 문장구조를 개선해야 합니다. 현재 답변은 반복과 시제·관사 오류가 있고 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 개선을 위해 다음을 연습하세요: 1) 올바른 관사와 복수형 사용 (a picture → pictures), 2) 동사 형태와 시제 수정 (I always take pictures), 3) 불필요한 반복 제거 및 한두 문장으로 직접 답하기(주제문 + 한 가지 구체적 지원 사항), 4) 연결어 사용으로 문장 흐름 개선 (For example, although some people find it annoying, I enjoy it because ...). 연습 문장을 소리 내어 반복하고 녹음해 스스로 교정하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I travel, I always take many photos to remember interesting places. Although some people find it annoying, I like capturing moments and details I might forget otherwise.

Sugestão: 문장 구성과 어휘 선택을 더 정확히 해야 합니다. 중복 표현(‘a lot a lot’)과 어색한 표현(‘some busy way looking look like busy scenery’)을 피하고, 주제문 뒤에 구체적인 이유를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(because, for example, which)로 논리를 명확히 하고 세부 묘사를 구체적으로 하세요. 또한 관사와 복수형, 어순에 주의하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy tall buildings and the energetic atmosphere. For example, busy streets with shops and cafes feel lively to me and offer interesting subjects to photograph.

Sugestão: 내용의 일관성과 사실 관계 표현을 정확히 해야 합니다. 'City side'와 'rural area'가 혼용되어 의미가 불분명합니다. 먼저 간단히 주제문으로 선호를 밝히고, 그 이유를 논리적으로 설명하세요. 예: I live in a small city/village so I prefer views abroad which have impressive skyscrapers. 구체적 예시와 연결어(for example, because)로 설명을 보강하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because my hometown is relatively small and lacks tall buildings. For example, cities like Seoul have impressive skyscrapers and busy streets full of shops, which I find more exciting to explore and photograph.

× Yeah, I really love taking picture.

✓ Yeah, I really love taking pictures.

Use plural 'pictures' because 'taking pictures' refers to the general activity of photographing multiple images. Countable noun 'picture' needs plural when speaking about the activity in general. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' for general activities or 'a picture' for one photo.

× When I go to traveling, I always taking pictures.

✓ When I go traveling, I always take pictures.

After 'go' use the base '-ing' form 'traveling' without 'to'. The verb phrase 'always take' requires the base form 'take' (simple present) to express habitual action. Remove the extra 'to' and change 'taking' to 'take'. Suggestion: Say 'go traveling' and 'I always take pictures.'

× So some people feel feel annoying about that, but I really love taking picture.

✓ So some people feel annoyed about that, but I really love taking pictures.

'People' is plural so keep 'pictures' plural. Also 'feel annoying' is wrong: people feel 'annoyed' (adjective describing their emotion). Use 'annoyed' instead of 'annoying'. Suggestion: Use 'annoyed' for people's feelings and plural 'pictures.'

× I take, I take a lot of pictures always.

✓ I take a lot of pictures always.

Repeated phrase 'I take, I take' is redundant and informal; place adverb 'always' before or after the verb phrase: 'I always take a lot of pictures.' Suggestion: Prefer 'I always take a lot of pictures.' for natural word order.

× I prefer the view of urban areas because I love big buildings and a lot a lot of people a lot of people and some busy way looking look like busy scenery and.

✓ I prefer urban views because I love big buildings, many people, and busy streets that look like lively scenery.

Reduce repetition 'a lot a lot of people' to 'many people.' 'Busy way' is incorrect; use 'busy streets.' 'Looking look like' is redundant. Rearrange adjectives and nouns for clarity. Suggestion: Use concise phrases: 'big buildings, many people, and busy streets.'

× I prefer another country because I live in City side so that's really rural area and there's not beautiful skyscraper and the city atmosphere but another country like Seoul.

✓ I prefer another country because I live on the city side so that's really a rural area and there aren't beautiful skyscrapers or a city atmosphere, but another country like Seoul has them.

Use 'on the city side' or 'in the city' rather than 'in City side.' Use article 'a rural area.' For negation with plural 'skyscraper' use 'aren't beautiful skyscrapers.' Also parallel structure: 'or a city atmosphere.' Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('in the city' or 'on the city side') and plural agreement for 'skyscrapers.'

× Seoul has a lot of buildings and shops. I love that busy St.

✓ Seoul has a lot of buildings and shops. I love that busy street.

Abbreviation 'St.' is informal; use 'street.' Ensure 'street' is written out. 'A lot of buildings and shops' is correct plural form. Suggestion: Write 'street' in full in spoken responses: 'I love that busy street.'