Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve naturalness and coherence by correcting small grammar errors and varying vocabulary. Use a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, when I travel I try to capture interesting light and strong compositions, because they can reveal a new perspective on familiar places. As a result, even ordinary streets can look dramatic in my photos.

Sugestão: Your idea is good but grammar, word choice and coherence need improvement. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (however, because) and provide specific reasons or examples. Replace incorrect words (e.g., "fuse") with appropriate ones ("scenery", "views").

Exemplo: I enjoy both, but I prefer rural areas. Because I live in a busy city, rural scenery feels peaceful and refreshing, with wide fields and quiet lanes that are great for photography.

Sugestão: You express a clear preference, but correct grammar, word choice, and sentence structure to sound more natural. Use a topic sentence, then give specific details and link them with words like "because" and "for example." Avoid single-word unclear terms like "Fuse."

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, especially around Solo. For example, Solo has many vintage buildings and also green, fresh areas nearby, so I can photograph both historic architecture and natural scenery without traveling far.

× It gives me new perspective on familiar places and I especially like capturing interesting light or composition when I travel.

✓ It gives me a new perspective on familiar places, and I especially like capturing interesting light or compositions when I travel.

Missing indefinite article before 'new perspective' (article error connected to present tense description) and noun number agreement for 'composition'. Add 'a' before 'new perspective' and use plural 'compositions' or keep singular with 'a composition' to match general preference. Also adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence structure.

× Honestly I enjoy both but since I know live in urban area, I prefer to choose rural area.

✓ Honestly, I enjoy both, but since I now live in an urban area, I prefer to choose rural areas.

Multiple issues: 'know' is incorrect word choice for 'now' (vocabulary/time expression), missing commas for clarity, and articles and number: 'an urban area' requires the indefinite article, and 'rural areas' is better as plural when speaking generally. These are present-tense descriptive statements so use 'now live' and correct articles/number.

× The rural area give me a peaceful and such a breathtaking fuse.

✓ The rural area gives me a peaceful and truly breathtaking feeling.

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'The rural area' requires 'gives' not 'give'. 'Such a breathtaking fuse' is incorrect collocation: replace with 'truly breathtaking feeling' or 'such a breathtaking view'. Adjust word choice to use natural collocations.

× I prefer Fuse in my current country 'cause I live in Solo, which has a vintage architecture that very interesting for me and it also has a side that very beautiful, green and fresh.

✓ I prefer places in my country because I live in Solo, which has vintage architecture that is very interesting to me, and it also has areas that are very beautiful, green, and fresh.

Several present-tense description errors: 'Fuse' is unclear and likely wrong word—replace with 'places'. Use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause'. 'A vintage architecture' is incorrect article usage; use no article with 'vintage architecture' or 'a vintage building'. Include the verb 'is' in 'that is very interesting' and ensure plural agreement: 'areas that are very beautiful'. Add commas for listing adjectives. These corrections keep present-tense consistency and correct articles, verbs, and noun number.