Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (why you like it, what you photograph). Keep to 1–3 sentences and avoid repetition (e.g., “other views” twice). Use connecting words if needed.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel abroad. For example, I like capturing city skylines at sunset and quiet rural landscapes in the morning because they help me remember the atmosphere of each place.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details linked with connectors. Correct grammar (e.g., “you can hear wildlife better,” “early morning chores are relaxing”) and avoid irrelevant or confusing statements. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they remind me of my hometown and feel more peaceful. For example, mornings in the countryside have fresher air and more bird song, which I find very relaxing.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and contains errors. Start with a direct statement (e.g., “I prefer views in other countries”), then give one clear reason and a brief example. Avoid incorrect words (e.g., “wheels”, “very clear of”) and awkward phrasing. Keep to 1–2 sentences and use simple accurate grammar.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing landscapes and cultures that are different from those at home. For example, I like photographing foreign architecture and street scenes when I travel alone because they feel new and exciting.

× Yes, I would like to collect some photos of other views in other countries.

✓ Yes, I would like to collect photos of different views in other countries.

The phrase 'some photos of other views in other countries' is awkward and repeats 'other'. Replace with 'photos of different views in other countries' to clearly express the idea. Use 'different' (quantifier/adjective) to indicate a variety of views rather than the vague and repetitive 'other'.

× I prefer rural areas because they remind me of my hometown and feel more peaceful.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they remind me of my hometown and are more peaceful.

The clause 'and feel more peaceful' incorrectly uses the verb 'feel' with the plural subject 'rural areas' in this context. Use the linking verb 'are' to describe a state: 'are more peaceful.' This keeps parallel structure with 'they remind... and are...'. Suggestion: keep verbs parallel when joining clauses with 'and'.

× The air is much fresher in the mornings and you can hear better other wildlife.

✓ The air is much fresher in the mornings and you can hear wildlife more clearly.

The adverb 'better' is misplaced before the object 'other wildlife', which sounds unnatural. Place the adverb after the object or use an adverbial phrase: 'hear wildlife more clearly.' Also, 'other' is unnecessary; simply 'wildlife' is appropriate here.

× I find that early morning chores were relaxing.

✓ I find that early morning chores are relaxing.

The sentence mixes present-tense reporting 'I find' with past tense 'were relaxing.' Maintain consistent tense: use present 'are relaxing' to match 'I find' (present simple). If referring to a past experience, change the reporting verb to past: 'I found that early morning chores were relaxing.'

× I prefer wheels in other countries as I'm very clear of all of my country's views and I like to travel as well.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I'm already familiar with my own country's scenery and I like to travel.

'Wheels' is incorrect - likely intended 'views'. 'I'm very clear of' is an incorrect collocation; use 'familiar with' or 'knowledgeable about.' 'All of my country's views' is odd; 'my own country's scenery' is more natural. Replace 'as' with 'because' for clarity. Maintain natural pronoun and noun usage.

× So it's very perfect view for other country that our seats, which is the main reason that I travel alone.

✓ So it's a much better experience to see views in other countries on my own, which is the main reason I travel alone.

This sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'It's very perfect view for other country that our seats' is nonsensical. I rephrased to clarify the intended meaning: traveling alone gives a better experience of foreign views. Use 'a much better experience' and 'on my own' to convey solo travel; remove 'our seats.' Keep the relative clause 'which is the main reason I travel alone' concise and grammatically correct.