Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cümlede dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat etmelisin. Örneğin "taking" fiilinde zaman uyumu ve "wives" (eşler) gibi yanlış kelime kullanımı var; doğru kelime muhtemelen "views" ya da "angles" olmalı. Cümlen çok uzun ve dolambaçlı; doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurup sonra kısa bir sebep ve bir örnek ver. Gereksiz dolgu sözcüklerinden (uh, um) kaçın ve maksimum 3-4 kısa cümle kullan.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I photograph various scenes or angles, I often feel like I’m back in that moment. For example, a seaside sunset can bring back the same peaceful feeling every time I look at the picture.

Sugestão: İfade daha doğal ve doğru kelime kullanımıyla geliştirilebilir. "This wife" gibi hatalı kelime seçimlerini düzelt; doğrusu "this vibe" olabilir. Ayrıca bağlaçlar ve mantıksal sıralama kullanarak cümleleri akıcı hale getir. Tekrarlardan kaçın ve özgün bir neden ve kısa örnek ver.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the city offers more dynamic and lively photo opportunities. The vibrant streets and colorful markets give me energy and inspiration. For instance, I often capture street performers and neon signs that look striking in photos.

Sugestão: Cümlen mantıklı ama tekrarlayan ifadeler var; daha doğal ve öz bir yapı kullan. "Because" bağlacını bir kez kullanıp, ardından spesifik bir örnek veya açıklama ekle. Dolgu kelimelerini çıkar ve fiil zamanlarına dikkat et.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover unique scenes I can’t find at home. For example, I once took photos of traditional markets in Morocco, and those images captured colors and patterns unlike anything back home.

× Actually I really like it because when I taking pictures from different wives for different uh, parts of photo, I feel I was in there again and again.

✓ Actually I really like it because when I take pictures of different views for different parts of a photo, I feel like I am there again and again.

The main error is incorrect verb form after when; 'when' is followed by the base form for present general actions, so use 'take' instead of 'taking'. 'Wives' is a spelling error for 'views' (not a listed grammar type but correct to 'views'). 'Feel I was' mixes tenses and word order; use 'I feel like I am there' for present-time experience. Also add the article 'a' before 'photo' and reorder 'of different views' for natural phrasing.

× Actually, I like more urban areas because I can take some photos which is more effective and more lively.

✓ Actually, I prefer urban areas because I can take photos that are more effective and livelier.

Use 'prefer' rather than 'like more' for preference. 'Which' should be 'that' in defining relative clauses. Adjective 'more lively' should be the comparative 'livelier'. 'More effective' can remain but pair structure with 'livelier' is clearer. Also omit 'some' which is unnecessary here.

× And I really like it because this wife gives me energy and motivating.

✓ And I really like it because this view gives me energy and motivation.

'Wife' is wrong word; 'view' is intended. 'Gives me energy and motivating' mixes noun and adjective; use the noun 'motivation' to parallel 'energy'. 'Motivating' would need a subject that causes motivation (is motivating), but 'gives me motivation' is correct.

× I would say in a, uh, in other countries because I like to travel and when I travel I really like to take photos of other countries because it might be quite unique and makes me feel happy.

✓ I would say in other countries because I like to travel, and when I travel I really like to take photos in other countries because they can be quite unique and make me feel happy.

Remove unnecessary article 'a' before 'in other countries'. Use 'take photos in other countries' rather than 'of other countries' to indicate location. 'Might be quite unique' is acceptable but 'can be quite unique' is more natural; ensure subject-verb agreement: plural 'they' for 'photos' or 'places' and 'make' not 'makes'.