Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, loại bỏ lỗi phát âm và từ thừa, trả lời ngắn gọn tự nhiên trong tối đa 5 câu. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi động từ (taking → take, to keep the memory → to keep memories), (2) loại bỏ lặp từ và từ sai (the I am the person → I am the kind of person; take him picture → take pictures), (3) thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ thích hợp như because/so/therefore để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I travel a lot, so I often take photos to keep memories. For example, I like capturing sunsets and city skylines because they remind me of special moments.

Sugestão: Làm rõ câu chủ đề và sắp xếp ý mạch lạc, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (‘I prefer rural views.’), (2) tránh lặp từ (‘the the’), (3) sửa ngữ pháp (it's have me feel → they make me feel), (4) dùng liên từ để nối ý (‘for example’, ‘especially’) và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể về cảnh bạn thích.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because nature scenes like mountains and beaches make me feel relaxed. For example, I especially enjoy mountain views with lots of green trees, as they help me unwind after a busy week.

Sugestão: Sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: nêu câu chủ đề, đưa lý do cụ thể và kết luận ngắn. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp số ít/ số nhiều (every country have → every country has; it's have → it has), tránh tiếng ums/ahhs và kết thúc câu đầy đủ. Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về nơi bạn thích trong nước sẽ mạnh câu trả lời.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse scenery. For instance, my country has beautiful beaches and mountains, like [name a place], where the coastline and hills create stunning views that I enjoy.

× Absolutely I would like to taking picture of different view because I'm the I am the person who like travel a lot.

✓ Absolutely, I would like to take pictures of different views because I am the kind of person who likes to travel a lot.

The verb after 'would like' should be the base form (take), not the -ing form; 'picture' and 'view' need plural forms to match 'different'; 'I'm the I am the person' is redundant and awkward — 'I am the kind of person' is correct; 'who like' must be 'who likes' to agree with singular 'person'. Suggestions: use 'would like to take', pluralize countable nouns when appropriate, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× So whenever I travel I would like to take him picture to keep the memory and also I can.

✓ So whenever I travel, I would like to take pictures to keep the memories, and I can.

The phrase 'take him picture' is incorrect — likely a mispronunciation; use plural 'pictures' and 'memories' for general experiences. 'Take ... to keep the memory' should be 'to keep the memories' or 'to keep a memory' depending on meaning. Remove 'him'. Ensure commas for clauses.

× I prefer view of rural areas because I like the the nature scenes like mountains or beach because it's have me feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because I like natural scenes like mountains or beaches since they make me feel relaxed.

Use plural 'views' to match general preference; 'the the nature scenes' has duplicate 'the' and 'nature scenes' is better as 'natural scenes'; 'mountain or beach' should be plural 'mountains or beaches' for general categories; 'it's have me feel relaxed' is ungrammatical — correct forms: 'they make me feel relaxed' or 'it makes me feel relaxed' depending on subject. Suggestions: match plurality and use correct verb forms ('make' for plural subjects).

× Especially in the Mountain View.

✓ Especially in mountain views.

'Mountain View' as a general idea should be plural and not capitalized unless it's a proper noun. Use 'in mountain views' or 'in a mountain view' depending on meaning. Ensure noun form matches context.

× When you look at the green color you will feel more relaxed and relieved.

✓ When you look at the green scenery, you feel more relaxed and relieved.

For general truths, use present simple ('you feel') rather than future 'you will feel'; 'green color' is unnatural — use 'green scenery' or 'the green' or 'greens'. Keep tense consistent for general statements.

× I would prefer my own country Uh, actually, I believe that every country have a different beauty, but in my opinion, I would prefer my country the most because it's really beautiful and it's have beach, it's have mountain, it has the umm, wonderful scenery.

✓ I would prefer my own country. Actually, I believe that every country has a different kind of beauty, but in my opinion, I prefer my country the most because it is really beautiful and it has beaches, mountains, and wonderful scenery.

Use 'has' not 'have' with singular 'every country' (subject-verb agreement). Avoid filler 'would prefer' repetition; 'I prefer my country the most' is clearer. Use plural 'beaches, mountains' for general features. 'It's have' is incorrect — use 'it has'. Suggestions: simplify sentences, use correct verb forms ('has') and plural nouns for general categories.

× I love my.

✓ I love my country.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object 'country'. Ensure sentences have necessary components (subject and object) to be complete.