Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp và hơi lặp ý. Hãy chú ý thì động từ (ví dụ: "Taking pictures help" → "Taking pictures helps"), số ít/ nhiều ("families" nên là "family" khi nói về gia đình mình), và tránh lặp thông tin ("capture moments, memories" tương tự nhau). Ngoài ra, câu cuối dài và thiếu mạch lạc; nên dùng liên từ hợp lý hoặc tách thành hai câu ngắn. Cố gắng giữ tối đa 4 câu, dùng từ vựng cụ thể (ví dụ: "landscapes", "city skylines", "sunsets").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often take photos to share with my family and friends because they help preserve memories of places I visit. For example, I like capturing city skylines at sunset or sweeping mountain landscapes. Later, we often look at the pictures together and talk about the trip.

Sugestão: Ý tưởng rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có so sánh giữa hai loại cảnh quan. Tuy nhiên cần chú ý một vài điểm: dùng danh từ không đếm được đúng cách ("natural scenery" thay vì "natural sceneries"), rút gọn câu dài bằng cách tách thành 2-3 câu, và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để làm rõ nguyên nhân (Because / While / However). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể sẽ làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery like open fields, trees and mountains, which feel peaceful and refreshing. I often go for walks in the countryside to relax and breathe fresh air. While cities have impressive skylines, they usually lack the green space I prefer.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng chứa nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng ảnh hưởng tới sự rõ ràng: những cụm từ "As far as impressive skyscraper" và phần "Evan goes to the eastern beaches where the coast school scenery" không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi từ vựng/ cú pháp. Tránh đưa vào tên người hoặc cụm không liên quan nếu không giải thích ("Evan" không cần thiết). Nên viết trực tiếp, mạch lạc: nêu lý do, đưa ví dụ cụ thể về địa điểm trong nước, và tách câu dài thành các câu ngắn hơn. Sửa lỗi từ vựng ("coast scenery" thay cho "coast school scenery").

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because we have many beautiful mountains and long sandy beaches. For example, the eastern coast near my hometown has stunning coastal scenery and clear water, which I find more appealing than foreign skylines. So I usually stay local when I want to enjoy nice views.

× I always try to take photos to share with my families and friends.

✓ I always try to take photos to share with my family and friends.

Use 'family' as a collective noun when referring to one's relatives in general; 'families' implies multiple separate family units. Use 'family and friends' which is the common collocation.

× Taking pictures help me capture moments, memories of the places I visit and later we can sit together and admiring the photos, especially landscapes of city or city skylines.

✓ Taking pictures helps me capture moments and memories of the places I visit, and later we can sit together and admire the photos, especially city landscapes or city skylines.

'Taking pictures' is a singular gerund phrase and requires the singular verb 'helps' (subject-verb agreement). 'Admiring' is incorrect after 'can' — modal verb 'can' must be followed by the base form 'admire'. Also improved word order: 'memories' pairs with 'moments' using 'and'; 'landscapes of city' is incorrect word order — use 'city landscapes'.

× As far as impressive skyscraper, for example, Evan goes to the eastern beaches where the coast school scenery is breathtaking, so I enjoy staying local rather than traveling abroad for views.

✓ As for impressive skyscrapers, for example, Evan goes to the eastern beaches where the coastal scenery is breathtaking, so I enjoy staying local rather than traveling abroad for views.

'As far as' is used for distance; use 'As for' to introduce a topic. 'Impressive skyscraper' should be plural 'skyscrapers' to match context. 'Coast school scenery' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'coastal scenery'. The sentence also had awkward structure; adjusted to maintain meaning and correct adjective forms.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I love natural sceneries such as open fields, trees and mountains, which feel peaceful and refreshing, and I often go for walks there to relax.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love natural scenery such as open fields, trees, and mountains, which feel peaceful and refreshing, and I often go for walks there to relax.

Use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun rather than 'sceneries'. Also added a comma before 'and' in the list for clarity. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× In contrast, urban areas usually have skylines and tall buildings that can seem uninspiring and often lack the green space I enjoy.

✓ In contrast, urban areas usually have skylines and tall buildings that can seem uninspiring and often lack the green spaces I enjoy.

'Green space' can be used uncountably, but when referring to multiple pockets of vegetation in cities, 'green spaces' is more natural. This is a minor adjectival/noun choice to improve idiomatic correctness.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This sentence is correct; no change needed. Included to follow instruction to reply each sentence's correction individually.

× Examiner: Do you like taking pictures of different views?

✓ Examiner: Do you like taking pictures of different views?

This question is grammatically correct; no change needed. Included for completeness.

× As far as impressive skyscraper, for example, Evan goes to the eastern beaches where the coast school scenery is breathtaking, so I enjoy staying local rather than traveling abroad for views.

✓ As for impressive skyscrapers, for example, Evan goes to the eastern beaches where the coastal scenery is breathtaking, so I enjoy staying local rather than traveling abroad for views.

Also noted that 'Evan goes' is third person singular and correctly uses 'goes'. The main issues were elsewhere, so this confirms correct verb form.