School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为直接，但表达稍显生硬，缺少连贯性。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: My school, Nanjing University of Economics and Finance, is located in Nanjing, which is in the southeast of China.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“it's a good facilities”和“the bigger stadium”。建议注意主谓一致和名词单复数，同时使用更准确的词汇。

Exemplo: Yes, I like my school not only because the teachers are friendly and kind, but also because it has good facilities and a large stadium.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，影响表达效果。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I think my school is a great place to study because the teachers are friendly and willing to help. Moreover, the student union often organizes activities to help new students make friends.

Sugestão: 回答中存在断句不当和表达不流畅的问题。建议合并句子，使用连接词，并注意冠词和词序的正确使用。

Exemplo: Our school has a large garden in front of the teaching buildings, which is filled with many tulips and roses. Therefore, I think the environment is very pleasant and helps me relax.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误，如“most important factors”应为“the most important factor”。建议注意冠词使用和单复数形式，同时丰富内容。

Exemplo: I think interest is the most important factor in studying because it determines the direction of your learning and greatly influences your future career.

× My school is Nanjing University of Economics and Finance, so it is located in the city Nanjing, southeast of China.

✓ My school is Nanjing University of Economics and Finance, so it is located in the city of Nanjing, in the southeast of China.

介词使用错误。应在“city”和“Nanjing”之间加介词“of”，表示“南京市”；在“southeast”和“China”之间加介词“in”，表示“在中国的东南部”。

× Yes, I like my school, not only because the teachers here, they are friendly and kind, but also it's a good facilities and the bigger stadium.

✓ Yes, I like my school, not only because the teachers here are friendly and kind, but also because it has good facilities and a big stadium.

量词使用错误。'facilities'是复数，前面不应加不定冠词'a'；'bigger'比较级用法不当，应改为形容词'big'。此外，句子结构不完整，需补充'because'和'has'使句子完整。

× Yes, I think my school is really good place to study because, uh. Teachers here are friendly and willing to help you with your studies was more the students union always organized some activities to help the freshers to meet new friends.

✓ Yes, I think my school is a really good place to study because teachers here are friendly and willing to help you with your studies. Moreover, the student union always organizes some activities to help the freshers meet new friends.

句子结构错误。'really good place'缺少冠词'a'；'was more'错误，应为'moreover'；'students union'应为'student union'；动词时态和主谓一致需调整。

× Our school has a really big a garden in front of the teaching buildings and with many. Tulips and roses inside.

✓ Our school has a really big garden in front of the teaching buildings with many tulips and roses inside.

冠词使用错误。'a really big a garden'中重复使用了不定冠词'a'，应去掉一个；句子中断句不当，应合并句子使其通顺。

× So I think the environment here is very good and can help me relax myself.

✓ So I think the environment here is very good and can help me relax.

反身代词使用错误。'relax'是一个不及物动词，后面不需要加反身代词'myself'。

× I think interest is most important factors of the study because interest decides the direction of the study and has a profound influence on your career path.

✓ I think interest is the most important factor in study because interest decides the direction of study and has a profound influence on your career path.

单复数错误。'factors'应为单数'factor'，因为前面用的是单数'is'；'most important'前应加定冠词'the'；'of the study'改为'in study'更自然。