School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Start directly by stating the location of your school, and avoid unnecessary details or unclear phrases. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: My school is called River High School, and it is located in our town, Sharpor. It is a large building with three floors: the ground floor, first floor, and second floor. The school has modern facilities and a pleasant environment.

Sugestão: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar. For example, 'motor in facilities' is unclear; you might mean 'modern facilities'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly to connect your ideas. Keep your sentences clear and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely like my school because it has modern facilities. Also, the building looks very nice. Moreover, there is a big playground with courts for basketball, cricket, and football.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas logically. Avoid vague phrases and try to be more precise.

Exemplo: I think my school is a good place to study because it has modern technology and many helpful teachers. Unlike other schools in my area, it provides better facilities and support for students' careers.

Sugestão: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'there is not much crowd' instead of 'they are not so much crowd'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: My school is a modern building with a calm and peaceful environment. Also, there are not many students at the same time, so it feels comfortable and quiet.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why interest is important using simple and correct sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Interest in study is extremely important because it motivates students to engage deeply with the material. When learners are interested, they tend to remember information better and perform well in exams.

× Oh well my school name is River High School Seniors Country Public School and it is situated in our Sharp OR.

✓ Oh well, my school's name is River High School Seniors Country Public School and it is situated in our Sharp OR.

The sentence lacks possessive form for 'school name' which should be 'school's name'. Also, a comma after 'Oh well' improves clarity and sentence flow.

× It is a big building consists of three floors, ground floor, first floor and 2nd floor.

✓ It is a big building that consists of three floors: ground floor, first floor, and second floor.

The original sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clauses properly. Also, '2nd floor' should be written as 'second floor' for consistency and formality.

× It shows the I OS build amazing.

✓ It shows the IOS building is amazing.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems to intend to say the IOS building is amazing, so it needs to be rephrased for clarity and correct verb usage.

× Yes definitely I like my school because it has a motor in facilities.

✓ Yes, definitely I like my school because it has modern facilities.

The phrase 'motor in facilities' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'modern facilities' to describe up-to-date amenities.

× Moreover it's building is a very good looking and also it has a big playground which consists of mainly 3 sports quotes such as basketball, cricket and football.

✓ Moreover, its building is very good looking and it also has a big playground which mainly consists of three sports courts such as basketball, cricket, and football.

The possessive pronoun 'it's' should be 'its'. 'Good looking' is an adjective phrase and should not have 'a' before it. 'Quotes' is incorrect; the correct word is 'courts'. Also, numbers under ten are usually written in words in formal English.

× I think so because in my locality most of these rules are not so much more and amenities, but that's cool, has good in touch with technology as well as there are so many teachers which helps to make a career of student right.

✓ I think so because in my locality most of these rules are not so many and amenities, but this school has good contact with technology as well as many teachers who help students build their careers.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'rules' likely should be 'schools' or 'facilities'; 'not so much more' is incorrect, 'not so many' is better; 'that's cool' is informal and unclear; 'has good in touch' is incorrect, should be 'has good contact'; 'which helps' should be 'who help' to agree with plural 'teachers'; 'make a career of student right' is awkward and corrected to 'help students build their careers'.

× Well, it is a modernized building and it has a very calm environment and peaceful as well as they are not so much crowd in my school and it was very good.

✓ Well, it is a modernized building and it has a very calm and peaceful environment. Also, there is not much crowd in my school and it is very good.

'Very calm environment and peaceful' is awkward; 'calm and peaceful environment' is better. 'They are not so much crowd' is incorrect; 'there is not much crowd' is correct. 'It was very good' should be 'it is very good' to maintain present tense.

× I will interested in study is extremely important because it motivates students in case deeply with the material well learners are generally interested.

✓ I will say interest in study is extremely important because it motivates students to engage deeply with the material. Well, learners who are generally interested tend to retain information better and perform well academically.

'I will interested' is incorrect; 'I will say interest' or 'I think interest' is correct. 'Motivates students in case deeply' is incorrect; 'motivates students to engage deeply' is correct. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.