School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，句子不完整，表达不自然。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断断续续。

Exemplo: My school is located in Jinan, which is in the western part of Shandong Province.

Sugestão: 回答过于消极且不完整，缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

Exemplo: I don't like my school because the administration is poor, the infrastructure is inconvenient, and some teachers are not very supportive.

Sugestão: 回答较为完整，但语法和用词有误，且表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的语法和丰富词汇，避免重复。

Exemplo: I don't think my school is a good place to study because the weather is very hot, and many classrooms lack air conditioning, which makes studying uncomfortable.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体，但语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和时态，表达更流畅。

Exemplo: My school has a big lake surrounded by trees, and a mountain is reflected on the lake, which is very beautiful. However, I often don't feel like appreciating it.

Sugestão: 回答表达不完整，语法错误较多，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并提供具体例子。

Exemplo: I think interest plays a key role in studying because without interest, it's hard to stay motivated, and learning becomes difficult and unpleasant.

× My school is. In a city called Jinan, where it's a. West of Shandong Province.

✓ My school is in a city called Jinan, which is in the west of Shandong Province.

原句句子结构不完整，断句错误。应将分散的句子合并成完整句子，使用关系代词"which"引导定语从句，表达更清晰。

× Because it had poor administration.

✓ Because it has poor administration.

描述学校现状应使用现在时，原句使用过去时不符合语境。

× And. The inconvenient infrastructure.

✓ And inconvenient infrastructure.

句子断裂，缺少谓语，导致句子不完整。应将其与前句连接，形成完整表达。

× And the teacher here is really.

✓ And the teachers here are really bad.

句子不完整，缺少表语。根据上下文推测应补充形容词描述教师情况，并注意主谓一致。

× but a lot of classroom have no air condition.

✓ but a lot of classrooms have no air conditioning.

classroom应为复数classrooms，air condition应为air conditioning，表达空调设备。

× And it really uncomfortable for us.

✓ And it is really uncomfortable for us.

缺少系动词is，导致句子不完整。

× Well, my school have a big lake surrounded by the trees and a mountain reflect on the lake.

✓ Well, my school has a big lake surrounded by trees and a mountain reflected on the lake.

主语my school为单数，谓语动词应用has。reflect应为过去分词reflected，作定语修饰mountain。

× But most of time I have no mood to appreciate them.

✓ But most of the time I have no mood to appreciate them.

缺少定冠词the，固定短语为most of the time。

× I think interest play a key role on study because when you have no interest on some subject, you will be no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

✓ I think interest plays a key role in study because when you have no interest in some subjects, you will have no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

interest为单数，谓语动词应为plays；介词应为in；subject应为复数subjects；动词have用于表达拥有。

× So if you can't learn it well.

✓ So if you can't learn it well, it will be difficult to succeed.

句子不完整，缺少主句，导致表达不清晰。应补充主句使句子完整。