School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中地理信息有误，台湾不是陕西省的省会城市，且表达不够清晰自然。建议准确描述学校所在地，避免错误信息，并简洁表达理由。

Exemplo: My school is located in Xi'an, the capital city of Shaanxi province. It is a comprehensive university with a spacious campus and modern facilities. I have been studying there for three years and really enjoy it.

Sugestão: 回答中表达有些重复且语法不够准确，建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅自然。

Exemplo: Yes, I like my school because it has many modern facilities, such as quiet libraries where I can concentrate, and a spacious playground for exercising.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的句式和连接词，清晰表达观点和理由。

Exemplo: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has separate buildings for different majors, which creates a strong academic atmosphere. Also, the library provides a quiet environment for studying.

Sugestão: 回答内容较丰富，但表达略显重复，建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意单复数和冠词的使用。

Exemplo: I live on a newly built campus that is bigger and more modern. Although there are fewer trees and flowers, making it feel less natural and relaxing, I appreciate the spacious classrooms and clean facilities.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复，建议使用更准确的时态和连词，简洁明了地表达观点。

Exemplo: I think interest is very important in study. When people face difficulties, if they don't like their major, they may give up. But if they are passionate, they will persist and overcome challenges.

× My school is in Taiwan, a capital city of Shaanxi province, and my school is a comprehensive university on my lovely.

✓ My school is in Taiwan, the capital city of Shaanxi province, and my school is a comprehensive university in my lovely city.

这里“a capital city”应为“the capital city”，因为陕西省只有一个省会城市，使用定冠词“the”表示特指。此外，“on my lovely”不完整，应补充为“in my lovely city”以表达完整意思。

× I love to study here because it's spacious campus and modern facilities, and I have been studying there for three years.

✓ I love to study here because it has a spacious campus and modern facilities, and I have been studying here for three years.

“it's spacious campus”中“it's”是“it is”，后面应接名词短语，正确用法是“it has a spacious campus”。另外，“there”指代不明确，改为“here”更符合语境。

× Actually, yes, as I mentioned before, I love there because it has many modern facilities like libraries which I can focus on myself and it is really quiet for me to learn and their spacious playground for me to exercise.

✓ Actually, yes, as I mentioned before, I love it there because it has many modern facilities like libraries where I can focus on myself, and it is really quiet for me to learn, and there is a spacious playground for me to exercise.

“I love there”缺少宾语，应为“I love it there”。“libraries which I can focus on myself”结构不正确，应改为“libraries where I can focus on myself”。“their spacious playground”指代不明，应改为“there is a spacious playground”。

× You know, my school has different buildings for different major, so we have the academic atmosphere to talk to discuss about the problems on academic and the library is really good for us to study.

✓ You know, my school has different buildings for different majors, so we have an academic atmosphere to talk and discuss problems related to academics, and the library is really good for us to study.

“different major”应为复数“different majors”。“talk to discuss about”重复且错误，应简化为“talk and discuss”。“problems on academic”应为“problems related to academics”。

× Actually, I live on a new campus which was just built recently.

✓ Actually, I live on a new campus which was just built recently.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Although the campus is a bit bigger and more modern, there are fewer trees and flowers, so the environment feels less natural and a little less relaxing than on campus.

✓ Although the campus is a bit bigger and more modern, there are fewer trees and flowers, so the environment feels less natural and a little less relaxing than the old campus.

“than on campus”比较对象不明确，应明确为“than the old campus”以表达比较关系。

× However, I appreciate the spacious classroom and clean facility.

✓ However, I appreciate the spacious classrooms and clean facilities.

“classroom”和“facility”应使用复数形式“classrooms”和“facilities”，因为通常指多个教室和设施。

× Actually, I do think it is significant because when people met difficulties in study, if they don't like their major, they just want to give up.

✓ Actually, I do think it is significant because when people meet difficulties in study, if they don't like their major, they just want to give up.

“when people met difficulties”时态不一致，应为一般现在时“when people meet difficulties”，因为描述的是普遍真理。

× Because on the other hand, if they have passion on their major, they just want to stick to it and overcome it.

✓ Because on the other hand, if they have passion for their major, they just want to stick to it and overcome it.

“have passion on their major”中介词应为“for”，正确表达为“have passion for their major”。