School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding unnecessary details and improving sentence structure. For example, you can say: "My school, Sahin Schools, is located in Denha, on the south side of the Netherlands."

Exemplo: My school, Sahin Schools, is located in Denha, on the south side of the Netherlands.

Sugestão: Avoid redundancy and improve clarity by using simpler and more natural expressions. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas. For example: "Yes, I really like my school because the atmosphere is friendly, and the teachers are very supportive in helping me improve my Dutch."

Exemplo: Yes, I really like my school because the atmosphere is friendly, and the teachers are very supportive in helping me improve my Dutch.

Sugestão: Make your answer more fluent by avoiding repetition and using linking words. Also, be more specific about why the school is good. For example: "I believe my school is a great place to study because the friendly and supportive environment helps students succeed."

Exemplo: I believe my school is a great place to study because the friendly and supportive environment helps students succeed.

Sugestão: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "The environment is friendly and supportive. The tutors are always willing to help and guide students to make better life choices."

Exemplo: The environment is friendly and supportive. The tutors are always willing to help and guide students to make better life choices.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain your point clearly. For example: "Interest in study is very important because without passion, your academic performance and grades may suffer."

Exemplo: Interest in study is very important because without passion, your academic performance and grades may suffer.

× My school is in Denha and it's called Sahin Schools. It's located on the South side of Netherlands.

✓ My school is in Denha and it's called Sahin Schools. It's located on the south side of the Netherlands.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Netherlands' because it is a country name that uses an article. Also, 'south' should not be capitalized as it is a direction, not a proper noun.

× I really enjoy and like my school because I love their the vibes and how careful they are to help me to increase my Dutch language and it is a very great place to enhance your Dutch language as well.

✓ I really enjoy and like my school because I love the vibes and how careful they are to help me improve my Dutch language. It is a great place to enhance your Dutch language as well.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used here; 'the vibes' is the correct phrase. Also, 'help me to increase my Dutch language' is awkward; 'help me improve my Dutch language' is more natural. The sentence was split for clarity.

× I I agree the idea that's my school is a good place to study since I studied there and I know the atmosphere and the vibes.

✓ I agree with the idea that my school is a good place to study since I studied there and I know the atmosphere and the vibes.

The phrase 'I I agree the idea that's' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'I agree with the idea that'. Also, 'that's' should be 'that'.

× It is friendly and very supportive so I advise and recommend all the people to study in it.

✓ It is friendly and very supportive, so I advise and recommend everyone to study there.

'All the people' is unnatural; 'everyone' is better. Also, 'study in it' is awkward; 'study there' is more appropriate.

× The environment is very friendly and supportive and the tutors are very, uh, willing to help and uh, to lead you to the correct, uh, side in your life and they always recommend and advise you and helps you to, uh, be better.

✓ The environment is very friendly and supportive, and the tutors are very willing to help and to guide you in the right direction in your life. They always recommend and advise you and help you to be better.

'Lead you to the correct side' is awkward; 'guide you in the right direction' is better. Also, 'helps you' should be 'help you' to agree with plural subject 'they'.

× The interesting study it is very very very important because the if you don't have the passion and the interest to study any field or any subject in your school, this will affect negatively in your academic level and grades.

✓ Interesting study is very, very important because if you don't have the passion and interest to study any field or subject in your school, it will negatively affect your academic level and grades.

'The interesting study it is' is incorrect; 'Interesting study is' is correct. Also, 'this will affect negatively in your academic level' should be 'it will negatively affect your academic level' for correct adverb placement and sentence structure.