School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "a located" and "raising the from locals and tourists." To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly relevant to the question.

Exemplo: My school is located in the Bromsgrove area of central London, right next to the British Museum. This location attracts many locals and tourists, making the area lively.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct minor grammatical errors such as "countries over 140" to "over 140 countries."

Exemplo: Yes, I love my school because it has students from over 140 countries. This diverse atmosphere makes it exciting to discuss and interact with people from different cultures.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and wordy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid vague phrases like "the situation can make it exciting." Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it is close to important facilities like the British Museum and the political library. This convenient location provides students, especially international ones, with valuable resources and inspiration.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "which is adds to the library atmosphere." To improve, use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure coherence with appropriate linking words.

Exemplo: The environment at my school is vibrant and dynamic because it is in a busy area with many nearby universities, attracting a diverse group of students. Moreover, being close to central London allows easy access to cultural events and social activities, enhancing the overall atmosphere.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear and awkward phrases like "Interesting studying" and "without big interests." To improve, use natural expressions and clearer sentence structures. Also, provide specific reasons to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Having an interest in studying is very important because it helps students stay focused and motivated. Without genuine interest, it can be hard to overcome challenges like long writing tasks and researching materials.

× My school is a located in the Bromsgrove area which is a part of central London and the building is right next to the British Museum and therefore there are many people raising the from locals and tourists.

✓ My school is located in the Bromsgrove area, which is a part of central London, and the building is right next to the British Museum. Therefore, there are many people arriving from locals and tourists.

The phrase 'a located in' is incorrect; 'a' should be removed before 'located'. Also, 'raising the from locals and tourists' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'arriving from locals and tourists'. The preposition 'from' is correct with 'arriving', but the verb 'raising' is wrong here. Additionally, the sentence is long and should be split for clarity.

× Yes, I love my school very much because there are numerous people from all over the world.

✓ Yes, I love my school very much because there are numerous people from all over the world.

No correction needed for this sentence as 'people' is correctly plural and matches the verb 'are'.

× In my school, the students come from countries over 140.

✓ In my school, the students come from over 140 countries.

The phrase 'countries over 140' is incorrect in word order. The quantifier 'over 140' should precede the noun 'countries' to form the correct phrase 'over 140 countries'.

× Their atmosphere there makes it exciting for me to discuss and interact with many people.

✓ The atmosphere there makes it exciting for me to discuss and interact with many people.

The pronoun 'Their' is incorrectly used here as it refers to people, but the intended subject is 'the atmosphere'. Replacing 'Their' with 'The' corrects the sentence.

× Yes, I believe the location of our school is ideal, especially for international students because there are many important facilities such as the British Museum and the political library near the university, and that the situation can make it exciting for students to study a lot.

✓ Yes, I believe the location of our school is ideal, especially for international students, because there are many important facilities such as the British Museum and the political library near the university, and this situation can make it exciting for students to study a lot.

The phrase 'and that the situation' is awkward and incorrect. Replacing 'that' with 'this' clarifies the reference to the previously mentioned situation. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× I think the environment of my school is quite vibrant and dynamic because it is located in busy area with many universities nearby which brings together a diverse group of students.

✓ I think the environment of my school is quite vibrant and dynamic because it is located in a busy area with many universities nearby, which brings together a diverse group of students.

The phrase 'in busy area' is missing the indefinite article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'in a busy area'.

× Additionally, being close to central London makes it easy for to access cultural events and the social activities which is adds to the library atmosphere.

✓ Additionally, being close to central London makes it easy to access cultural events and social activities, which adds to the lively atmosphere.

The phrase 'makes it easy for to access' is missing the object pronoun after 'for'; it should be 'makes it easy to access' or 'makes it easy for us to access'. Also, 'the social activities' should be 'social activities' without 'the'. 'which is adds' is incorrect; it should be 'which adds'. 'library atmosphere' seems to be a typo for 'lively atmosphere'.

× Interesting studying is the most important factor to concentrate on learning.

✓ Being interested in studying is the most important factor to concentrate on learning.

'Interesting studying' is incorrect; 'interesting' describes something that causes interest, but here the intended meaning is the student's interest. The correct phrase is 'being interested in studying'.

× That is mainly because of without big interests, it is difficult for everyone to overcome challenging hardships such as lengthy writing and searching for materials.

✓ That is mainly because without great interest, it is difficult for everyone to overcome challenging hardships such as lengthy writing and searching for materials.

The phrase 'because of without big interests' is incorrect. 'Because' should not be followed by 'of' when followed by a clause. Also, 'big interests' is unnatural; 'great interest' is more appropriate. The preposition 'for' after 'difficult' is correct.