School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: My school, Camping Sporting Secondary School, is located in the Balpa district of my hometown in Nepal. It is well-known for its polite and supportive teachers who have taught us discipline and generosity.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making it more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about why you like your school.

Exemplo: Yes, I like my school because I have been studying there since nursery. Over the years, I have built strong relationships with my teachers and friends, who are all very kind and supportive.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons why the school is a good place to study.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my school is a great place to study because the atmosphere is quiet and peaceful. Moreover, the teachers are very supportive and helpful, which creates an ideal learning environment.

Sugestão: Clarify your answer by using correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words to make your response more effective.

Exemplo: The environment at my school is polite and quiet because teachers are responsible and attend their classes on time. Additionally, students are focused on their studies, which makes the atmosphere ideal for learning.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to explain why interest is important and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: Interest in study is very important because without it, concentrating becomes difficult. For example, having a passion for history helps me stay focused and achieve better grades.

× My school is in hometown.

✓ My school is in my hometown.

The definite article 'the' or possessive pronoun 'my' is needed before 'hometown' to specify which hometown is being referred to. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× My school name is Camping Sporting Secondary School which is located at Balpa district of Nepal and it's the best school in my hometown and the teachers are really polite and supportive.

✓ My school's name is Camping Sporting Secondary School, which is located in the Balpa district of Nepal. It's the best school in my hometown, and the teachers are really polite and supportive.

Possessive form 'My school's name' is correct instead of 'My school name'. Also, 'in the Balpa district' is the correct preposition and article usage. Commas are added for clarity and sentence separation.

× which is located at Balpa district of Nepal

✓ which is located in the Balpa district of Nepal

The correct preposition for locations like districts is 'in', not 'at'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'Balpa district' as it is a specific place.

× They have taught us to be a discipline and and a generous person.

✓ They have taught us to be disciplined and generous people.

'Discipline' is a noun, but the adjective 'disciplined' is needed here. Also, since 'us' refers to multiple people, 'person' should be pluralized to 'people'.

× Yes, I like my school because I have study since my childhood.

✓ Yes, I like my school because I have studied since my childhood.

The present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'studied' after 'have'.

× I think I have studied there when I was class nursery to to wealth I I have spent most of the whole my life there and I have known all the teachers and my friends.

✓ I think I have studied there since nursery class. I have spent most of my life there and I know all the teachers and my friends.

'Since' is used to indicate the starting point of an action continuing to the present. 'Have known' is incorrect here; 'know' is better for current knowledge. Also, 'to wealth' is unclear and likely a mistake, so it is omitted for clarity.

× They are really sweet and kind.

✓ They are really sweet and kind.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Yes, it is really good place to study.

✓ Yes, it is a really good place to study.

The indefinite article 'a' is needed before 'really good place' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Everywhere you see the atmosphere and the surrounding is really quite and the society people are really silent and the teachers are really supportive and helpful.

✓ Everywhere you see, the atmosphere and surroundings are really quiet, the people in the society are really calm, and the teachers are really supportive and helpful.

'Quite' is an adverb meaning 'completely' but 'quiet' is the adjective meaning 'silent'. 'Surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings'. 'Society people' is better expressed as 'people in the society'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× So it's a good and a perfect place.

✓ So it's a good and perfect place.

When two adjectives modify the same noun, the article 'a' is used only once before the first adjective.

× The environment like at my school is really polite and quite because all teachers are following the duties and going out on their respective classes and students are more focused on study which makes it more perfect and uh.

✓ The environment at my school is really polite and quiet because all teachers are following their duties and attending their respective classes, and students are more focused on studying, which makes it more perfect.

'Like' is unnecessary after 'environment'. 'Quite' should be 'quiet'. 'Going out on their respective classes' is incorrect; 'attending their respective classes' is correct. 'Focused on study' should be 'focused on studying'.

× Yes, it is really important to have interest in history.

✓ Yes, it is really important to have an interest in history.

The phrase 'have interest' is incorrect; it should be 'have an interest' to be grammatically correct.

× Unless you have interests in history, you can't concentrate or you can't focus on your work or study, so you.

✓ Unless you have an interest in history, you can't concentrate or focus on your work or study.

'Interests' should be singular 'interest' with the article 'an'. The phrase 'so you' at the end is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× So the main important thing is having a passionate and interest in history, which makes you feel too concentrated and have a good score.

✓ So the main important thing is having passion and interest in history, which helps you concentrate better and achieve good scores.

'Having a passionate and interest' is incorrect; 'having passion and interest' is correct. 'Too concentrated' is incorrect; 'concentrate better' is appropriate. 'Have a good score' is better expressed as 'achieve good scores'.