School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use clearer and more accurate vocabulary, and organise your answer logically. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, instead of 'press fresh air' say 'breathe fresh air'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Exemplo: My school is located in the suburbs of the city, where we can breathe fresh air and enjoy beautiful scenery. There are many parks nearby, so sometimes we have picnics and relax outside.

Sugestão: Focus on giving a clear and structured answer. Start with a direct response, then explain your reasons with linking words. Avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and incomplete sentences. Also, check your grammar, for example, 'it teach me' should be 'it teaches me'.

Exemplo: I have mixed feelings about my school. On one hand, I like it because it teaches me valuable knowledge and lessons. On the other hand, I sometimes wish I had more holidays to relax and play instead of studying.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Definitely. My school has a large library where students can study quietly and concentrate effectively. Additionally, there is a park nearby where we can relax and review our materials outdoors.

Sugestão: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, 'app ancient building complex' is unclear. Also, organise your answer logically and avoid unrelated information unless it supports your main point. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: In general, my school has an old building complex surrounded by many beautiful trees and flowers, which makes the environment lively and colourful. I also enjoy cycling around the campus.

Sugestão: Focus on expressing your ideas clearly and using correct grammar. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your points logically. For example, explain why interest motivates learning and how it helps.

Exemplo: Interest is very important in studying. As the proverb says, 'Interest is the teacher of learning.' When you are interested in a subject, you are more motivated to study for longer periods and understand the material better.

× My school is located in the city suburbs, so we can press fresh air and stay most beautiful scenery.

✓ My school is located in the city suburbs, so we can breathe fresh air and enjoy the most beautiful scenery.

The phrase 'press fresh air' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'breathe' when referring to air. Also, 'stay most beautiful scenery' is incorrect; 'enjoy the most beautiful scenery' is appropriate to express appreciating the scenery.

× You know, there are so many parks, there are schools, so we can have a picnic, go to there and just lie down, watch the sky.

✓ You know, there are so many parks and schools, so we can have a picnic, go there and just lie down and watch the sky.

The phrase 'go to there' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go there'. Also, 'there are so many parks, there are schools' is better connected with 'and' for clarity.

× I like it because it teach me knowledge and valuable lessons on the island side.

✓ I like it because it teaches me knowledge and valuable lessons on the island side.

The verb 'teach' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'teaches'.

× Definitely, because you know there is a big library you could set quietly and concentrate on your study efficiently.

✓ Definitely, because you know there is a big library where you can sit quietly and concentrate on your studies efficiently.

The phrase 'you could set quietly' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'sit'. Also, 'concentrate on your study' should be 'concentrate on your studies' to refer to the activity in plural form.

× On the other hand, there is a park land reading park, so you could recite or memorize your material.

✓ On the other hand, there is a parkland reading park, so you can recite or memorize your material.

The phrase 'park land' should be 'parkland' as one word. Also, 'could' is less certain; 'can' fits better to express ability or possibility here.

× In general, I think it's like app ancient building complex and there are so many beautiful trees, flowers, which makes our school looks more lively and colorful.

✓ In general, I think it's like an ancient building complex and there are so many beautiful trees and flowers, which make our school look more lively and colorful.

The article 'app' is incorrect; it should be 'an'. Also, 'makes our school looks' is incorrect; the plural subject 'trees and flowers' requires 'make' and the verb 'look' without 's'.

× I really like to cycle.

✓ I really like cycling.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form when expressing hobbies or preferences, so 'like cycling' is more natural than 'like to cycle' in this context.

× There is a proverb that goes interest is a teacher of learning.

✓ There is a proverb that goes 'Interest is the teacher of learning.'

The proverb is a fixed expression and should be quoted correctly with the definite article 'the' before 'teacher'. Also, capitalisation is needed for the proverb.

× So if you have, if you, if you interest, if you are interested in something, you have the motivator to study longer.

✓ So if you have interest, if you are interested in something, you have the motivation to study longer.

The phrase 'if you interest' is incorrect; it should be 'if you have interest' or 'if you are interested'. Also, 'motivator' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'motivation'.

× It's like you're intrinsical motivation you could.

✓ It's like your intrinsic motivation helps you.

The word 'intrinsical' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'intrinsic'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'helps you' completes the thought logically.