School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organise the answer with a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific location details. Avoid repetition and long fragments. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “beside” and “near”).

Exemplo: My school is in Al Ahmadi, in the south of Kuwait. It is located beside Al Ahmadi Hospital and close to King Fahad Street, so it is easy to reach by car or bus.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence (yes or no) then give one or two specific reasons. Use correct grammar (singular/plural) and avoid repeating words. Use linking words such as “because” and “for example”.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I like my school because it has many facilities, for example a well-equipped laboratory on the second floor with biology, chemistry and physics sections next to the administration block.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then support with two precise reasons. Avoid hesitations (uh) and improve sentence structure: use relative clauses correctly and name institutions clearly. Link reasons with words like “because” and “also”.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe it is a good place to study because it has well-equipped chemistry, biology and physics laboratories. It also has qualified teachers, for instance a mathematics teacher who trained at Nottingham and Birmingham universities.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence describing the school environment, then add specific supporting details. Use accurate vocabulary (for example “multicultural” instead of “uni uniculture”) and correct grammar. Link ideas with words like “and” or “which”.

Exemplo: The environment at my school is multicultural with a mainly Arab student body. Lessons are taught in both Arabic and English, which helps students prepare for university study abroad.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement about importance, then give one or two clear reasons. Use correct phrasing (for example “interest in study” not “interesting this study”) and avoid awkward constructions. Use linking words like “because” and “therefore”.

Exemplo: Interest in studying is crucial because when you are interested you focus more and remember information better. Therefore you can understand what is important and apply it in exams or daily life.

× My school is in Al Ahmadi city, southern Kuwait that's located in the middle of the Al Ahmadi city beside the hospital of Al Ahmadi.

✓ My school is in Al Ahmadi city in southern Kuwait; it is located in the middle of Al Ahmadi, next to Al Ahmadi Hospital.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has redundant articles and place names. Use 'in southern Kuwait' for region, 'in the middle of Al Ahmadi' (no article before the city), and 'next to' or 'beside' for proximity. Also remove repeated 'the' and streamline the clause with a semicolon or separate sentences. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11)

× Also you can go to my school and the main road of UH Kingdom King Al Fahad St.

✓ You can also reach my school from the main road, King Al Fahad Street.

The original uses 'and' incorrectly and has an awkward word order. Use 'reach from' or 'access from' and place 'also' after the subject for natural flow. Simplify the street name to 'King Al Fahad Street.' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 16)

× Yes, I do. Actually. I like my school because my school, it has a lot of facility.

✓ Yes, I do. Actually, I like my school because it has a lot of facilities.

Fragmentation and redundancy: 'Actually.' is a fragment; 'my school, it has' is redundant. Combine into one sentence and use the plural 'facilities.' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× For example, it has a laboratory that's in the second floor and has a biology, chemistry and physical, physical, physical department that's located beside the administration.

✓ For example, it has a laboratory on the second floor and biology, chemistry and physics departments located next to the administration office.

Use 'on the second floor' (correct preposition) and plural 'departments' for multiple subjects. Remove repeated 'physical' and use 'next to the administration office' for clarity. Also use the definite article only where necessary. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 22)

× Actually, yes, because my school, it has a lot of facilities, for example, chemical laboratory and biology and also physics.

✓ Yes, because my school has many facilities, for example a chemistry laboratory, biology and physics departments.

Use 'a chemistry laboratory' and plural 'departments' for subjects. Remove redundant phrasing 'my school, it has' and replace 'a lot of' with 'many' for formality. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 22)

× Also it has a mathematics teacher that's expert and uh, teaching that's get their qualification from the, uh, Nottingham and the Birmingham, uh, and uh, I love my school.

✓ It also has an experienced mathematics teacher who received their qualifications from Nottingham and Birmingham, and I love my school.

Use third person relative clauses properly: 'teacher who received' (past tense) rather than 'that's get.' Use 'experienced' instead of 'that's expert.' 'Received' is past tense to indicate qualification obtained. Use singular 'teacher' with gender-neutral 'their.' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 2)

× Actually, my environment is an Arab country, my school is at the uni uniculture, but both language, it has an Arabic and English language that's sound to push us to continue our education in the university.

✓ I live in an Arab country. My school is multicultural and uses both Arabic and English, which encourage us to continue our education at university.

Multiple issues: article misuse ('an Arab country' is fine but sentence structure was poor), 'uni uniculture' unclear - 'multicultural' is appropriate. Use 'uses both Arabic and English' rather than 'it has an Arabic and English language.' Use 'which encourage us' to refer to languages (plural). Use 'at university' rather than 'in the university' for general study. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 22)

× The interesting this study is crucial because when you studying and relaxing what the information you get it from the teacher, you will be directly to your brain and you will memorize everything smoothly and easily and easily.

✓ Interest in studying is crucial because when you study and relax, the information you get from the teacher goes directly to your brain and you memorise everything smoothly and easily.

Tense and verb form errors: use noun phrase 'Interest in studying' rather than 'The interesting this study.' Use present simple 'study' not 'studying' after 'when you.' Remove redundant words and correct verb forms: 'the information you get from the teacher goes directly to your brain' rather than 'you will be directly to your brain.' Also use British spelling 'memorise.' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)

× So we can to distinguish between the important thing and we can know what's happened.

✓ So we can distinguish between important things and know what happened.

Remove the unnecessary 'to' after 'can.' Use plural 'important things.' 'Know what happened' is the correct past clause. The sentence was wordy; simplify for clarity. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 16)