Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免使用口头语“Umm”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以直接说自己是高中12年级学生，并且准备明年上大学。

Exemplo: I am currently a 12th-grade high school student, preparing to enter university next year.

Sugestão: 回答过于冗长且不连贯，缺少清晰的主题句和逻辑连接词。建议简洁明了地描述学习地点和学习活动，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I study at school where I attend classes to learn from my teachers. After lessons, I usually review the material in the laboratory to prepare for tasks and quizzes.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且口头语较多。应明确表达图书馆安静，有助于集中注意力学习。

Exemplo: Yes, the library is a great place to study because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better on my studies.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够自然，且有重复和口头语。建议简洁表达对学习环境的满意，并说明原因。

Exemplo: I wouldn't want any changes because the study environment is very important to me and it helps me concentrate well.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和口头语，表达不够清晰。建议明确表达未来计划，包括去国外上大学并努力学习。

Exemplo: In the coming years, I plan to study at a university abroad on my own, and I will work harder to achieve better results.

× I'm a student for the high school, grades 12 and preparing to the university next year.

✓ I'm a student in high school, grade 12, and preparing to go to university next year.

这里“the high school”应改为“high school”，因为一般说法中不加冠词；“grades 12”应为“grade 12”，因为指的是单一年级；“preparing to the university”应改为“preparing to go to university”，动词短语需要完整表达。

× I'm gonna have a class, I will get to the school and have a lessons umm to get a knowledge from teacher to teaching us and after lessons I will study in the laboratory to go over the knowledge and preparing for the task and quiz.

✓ I'm going to have a class. I will go to school and have lessons to get knowledge from the teacher teaching us. After lessons, I will study in the laboratory to review the knowledge and prepare for the tasks and quizzes.

“gonna”应改为正式表达“going to”；“have a lessons”中“a”与复数“lessons”不匹配，应去掉“a”；“to get a knowledge”中“knowledge”不可数，去掉冠词；“to teaching us”应改为“teaching us”或“who teaches us”；“preparing”应改为“prepare”，保持动词形式一致。

× I will get to the school and have a lessons umm to get a knowledge from teacher to teaching us

✓ I will go to school and have lessons to get knowledge from the teacher teaching us

“a lessons”中“a”与复数“lessons”不匹配，应去掉“a”；“a knowledge”中“knowledge”是不可数名词，不加冠词；“teacher”前应加定冠词“the”。

× Yes, it's a good place for studying, uh, in the library.

✓ Yes, it's a good place to study, uh, the library.

“a good place for studying”更常用表达是“a good place to study”；“in the library”应直接接在“place”后面，表达更自然。

× Uh, it was really quiet and I can't focus on, uh, my studying and the knowledge.

✓ Uh, it is really quiet and I can focus on my studying and the knowledge.

时态应保持一致，描述当前环境应使用现在时“is”；“can't”应为“can”表示能够集中注意力。

× It made me more, uh, concerned.

✓ It made me more, uh, focused.

“concerned”意为“担心”，语境中应表达“更专注”，故改为“focused”。

× I don't want to make any changes because the place I study, I, I was really significant about that and, uh, it is a great environment for me to, uh, concentrate better.

✓ I don't want to make any changes because the place I study is really significant to me, and it is a great environment for me to concentrate better.

“I was really significant about that”语法错误，应改为“is really significant to me”，保持时态一致且表达正确。

× Uh, in the next years, I will, uh, go for the university to, uh, another country by myself and I will, uh, study more harder to get a better boundary.

✓ Uh, in the next year, I will go to university in another country by myself, and I will study harder to get better grades.

“in the next years”应为“in the next year”或“next year”；“go for the university”应改为“go to university”；“study more harder”中“more”与“harder”重复，应去掉“more”；“better boundary”表达不当，应为“better grades”（更好的成绩）。