Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“for master degree”应为“for my master's degree”，并且句子结构可以更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I'm currently a graduate student at National Chatham University, studying architecture and design. I'm also working on my CCS as part of my master's degree.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，如“the the”，应注意语法和用词准确性，同时句子可以更简洁自然。

Exemplo: I usually study in the library because it offers a quiet and focused environment that helps me concentrate on reading and research.

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。应使用连贯的句子并具体说明资源。

Exemplo: Absolutely. Our university library provides important resources like books, internet access, and various magazines, which are very helpful for my studies.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达可以更简洁自然，避免口头语“uh”。

Exemplo: I don't think the library needs any changes because it has a great atmosphere, good resources, and a convenient location.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，应简洁明了地表达未来计划。

Exemplo: After I graduate with my master's degree, I plan to work for a while and prepare to pass the National Architecture certification exam.

× I'm working on my CCS for master degree.

✓ I'm working on my CCS for my master's degree.

这里的'master degree'应为'master's degree'，表示硕士学位，属于名词所有格的用法，且'master'需要加所有格's'。

× I tend to go to library because of the the focused atmospheres and a good, uh, peaceful environment that can make me concentrate.

✓ I tend to go to the library because of the focused atmosphere and a good, uh, peaceful environment that helps me concentrate.

'go to library'应为'go to the library'，因为特指某个图书馆；'atmospheres'应为单数'atmosphere'，表示环境氛围；'make me concentrate'更自然的表达是'helps me concentrate'。

× The library in our university is only significant resource such as books or Internet and some magazine that, uh, whatever you want to you, you need.

✓ The library in our university is the only significant resource, such as books, the Internet, and some magazines that, uh, whatever you want, you need.

'resource'前应加定冠词'the'且为单数；'Internet'前加定冠词'the'；'magazine'应为复数'magazines'；句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× Actually, I think it is not necessary to change the space or environment that in the library now because of not only, uh, the atmosphere and the good resources, but also the convenient, uh, location.

✓ Actually, I think it is not necessary to change the space or environment in the library now because of not only the atmosphere and the good resources, but also the convenient location.

'that in the library'结构不正确，应直接用'in the library'；'because of not only... but also...'结构中不应有逗号，且表达应连贯。

× After I graduate from school and get the master degree, I tend to work for a while and at the same time I try to I will try to pass the test for the National Architecture certification.

✓ After I graduate from school and get my master's degree, I intend to work for a while and at the same time I will try to pass the test for the National Architecture certification.

'tend to'用法不太合适，改为'intend to'更准确；'try to I will try to'重复，应删去多余部分；'master degree'应为'master's degree'。