Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法错误较多，如时态和单复数形式，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态一致性和单复数形式，避免拼写错误，并使表达更简洁流畅。

Exemplo: I have been working in a hospital for 10 years, many of which have involved conducting medical research. This role allows me to explore innovative treatments.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“2010 years”应为“in 2010”，“specialized”时态错误，“value”用词错误。建议注意时间表达、动词时态和词汇准确性。

Exemplo: I started studying at Shenyang Pharmaceutical University in 2010. It is a well-known university in China that specializes in pharmacy and related fields. I chose this university because it has excellent facilities and experienced teachers.

Sugestão: 回答中存在主谓不一致和表达不自然的问题，如“course are”应为“courses are”，“help them get a really experience”表达不准确。建议注意主谓一致和表达的准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, it is because the courses at the university are very practical. Students often spend a lot of time studying here, which helps them gain valuable experience.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够清晰，且有语法和用词错误，如“hot water dispenser”前缺少冠词，“especially during all cold water”表达不明确。建议提高表达的准确性和逻辑性。

Exemplo: I think the university should provide more facilities for students, such as a hot water dispenser, because having access to hot water is very important, especially during cold weather. This would make the study environment more comfortable for students.

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“deep deepen”，“preparing myself for by reading”，表达不够流畅。建议注意用词准确和句子结构完整。

Exemplo: Next year, I will start my PhD studies because I want to deepen my knowledge in my field. I am preparing by reading relevant books and improving my research skills. I also plan to manage my time effectively.

× This role allow me to explore invention treatments.

✓ This role allows me to explore innovative treatments.

主语是单数名词“role”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“allows”。此外，“invention treatments”应为“innovative treatments”，但这属于词汇错误，不在本次纠正范围内。

× I started at Shenyang Pharmaceutical University in 2010 years.

✓ I started at Shenyang Pharmaceutical University in 2010.

“in 2010 years”中“years”多余，年份表达时不加复数。

× It is a well known university in China that specialized in pharmacy and related fields.

✓ It is a well-known university in China that specializes in pharmacy and related fields.

“well known”作为复合形容词应连字符连接为“well-known”。“specialized”应为现在时“specializes”，因为描述的是学校的持续特征。

× I chose this value because it has excellent facility and experienced teacher.

✓ I chose this value because it has excellent facilities and experienced teachers.

“facility”和“teacher”应使用复数形式“facilities”和“teachers”，因为通常指多个设施和教师。

× Yes, it is because the course at the university are very practical.

✓ Yes, it is because the courses at the university are very practical.

主语“course”应为复数“courses”，以与复数动词“are”保持一致。

× Students always spend a lot of time to study here, which help them get a really experience.

✓ Students always spend a lot of time studying here, which helps them get real experience.

“spend time to study”应改为“spend time studying”，动词后应接动名词形式。谓语动词“help”应为第三人称单数“helps”，因为先行词是“which”指代单数。“a really experience”中“really”应为形容词“real”，且“experience”不可数，前面不加冠词。

× I think the university should provide more facilities for students such as hot water dispenser because having access to hot water is very important especially during all cold water.

✓ I think the university should provide more facilities for students such as hot water dispensers because having access to hot water is very important especially during cold weather.

“hot water dispenser”应为复数“hot water dispensers”，表示多个设备。短语“during all cold water”不合适，应改为“during cold weather”，表示寒冷天气。

× This could make the study environment more comfortable for the student.

✓ This could make the study environment more comfortable for the students.

“student”应为复数“students”，指所有学生。

× Next year I will start my PhD studies because I want to deep deepen my knowledge in my field.

✓ Next year I will start my PhD studies because I want to deepen my knowledge in my field.

“deep deepen”重复，应去掉“deep”，保留动词“deepen”。

× I am preparing myself for by reading relevant books and improving my research skills.

✓ I am preparing myself by reading relevant books and improving my research skills.

“preparing myself for by”结构错误，应去掉“for”，直接用“preparing myself by ...”。

× I also plan to manage time.

✓ I also plan to manage my time.

“manage time”缺少限定词，应加“my”表示管理自己的时间。