Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 优化句子结构与时态，明确主句并去掉多余词汇。注意冠词和单数复数形式，句子不宜过长，控制在3-4句内。可以先直接回答身份，再简要说明原因和目标。

Exemplo: I'm currently a student at Digital University studying Data Science and Big Data. I chose this major because it offers excellent job prospects. My goal is to secure a well-paid, stable position in the tech industry after graduation.

Sugestão: 简化表达，先给出地点并用连接词说明原因或活动。注意重复词（like "and and"）和不自然短语，使用正确介词和名词形式。把科研活动与地点联系更清楚。

Exemplo: I usually study in two places: the UMM library, which is quiet and helps me concentrate, and the UH research studio, where I work with my team. At the research studio I joined a cybersecurity project guided by our tutor.

Sugestão: 回答应更直接，避免模糊词（如"indefinitely"）和拼写错误。先给出明确肯定或否定，然后用2句简短具体原因支持，用连接词如"because"或"and"衔接。保持句子简洁。

Exemplo: Yes, they are good places to study. The library has plenty of books and a quiet atmosphere, so I can concentrate, and the research studio is ideal for discussing ideas and collaborating with classmates.

Sugestão: 避免口头语（如"uh"），注意主谓一致与词汇选择（例如"students are"、"seats"而非"States"）。先回答"Yes"，然后给出两到三个具体改进建议并说明理由。

Exemplo: Yes, I would. The university is admitting more students but the library hasn't expanded, so it needs more study seats and faster Wi‑Fi. Improved facilities would make it easier for everyone to study effectively.

Sugestão: 表达清晰且目标明确，但注意搭配和冠词（"a master's degree"），以及用连词使逻辑更顺畅。可按先后顺序描述短期和长期计划并简要说明原因。

Exemplo: In the near future I plan to pursue a master's degree abroad to gain international experience. If I have the opportunity afterwards, I would like to do a PhD because I'm passionate about research.

× Currently and students study in digital university majoring in data science and big data.

✓ Currently I am a student at Digital University, majoring in Data Science and Big Data.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和正确的动词形式。“Currently and students study in digital university majoring in data science and big data.” 中的“and students”多余且语序不当。建议明确主语“I”，使用现在进行时或现在时的系动词“am”，并把学校名称和专业作恰当的名词短语处理。示例："Currently I am a student at Digital University, majoring in Data Science and Big Data."

× I choose this major because I think it has a great job prospect so I hope to land a decent and well paid job in the future.

✓ I chose this major because I think it has great job prospects, so I hope to land a decent and well-paid job in the future.

时态和词形需要调整：描述过去做出选择时，用一般过去时“chose”。“prospect”应使用复数“prospects”。“well paid”为复合形容词，需连字符"well-paid"。同时在句中加入逗号分隔并连接从句以增强可读性。

× I think there are two places, one is the UMM library with focus and and quiet atmosphere and other one is the studios research studio UH.

✓ I think there are two places: one is the UMM library, which has a focused and quiet atmosphere, and the other is the research studio at UH.

原句中介词和定语从句使用不当：“with focus and and quiet atmosphere”应改为"which has a focused and quiet atmosphere"以修饰library。重复的"and"应删除。"studios research studio UH"词序混乱，需改为"the research studio at UH"。

× Accordingly, I joined a research team on cybersecurity on the guidelines of our tutor.

✓ Accordingly, I joined a cybersecurity research team under the guidance of our tutor.

介词使用不当：应使用"joined a cybersecurity research team"而不是"on cybersecurity"；"on the guidelines of our tutor"应改为更自然的短语"under the guidance of our tutor"（在导师的指导下）。

× Indefinitely, that's why I choose these two please and to study and for library, you can find some books easily and you can very concentrate on your own study and doing this research studio.

✓ Definitely — that's why I choose these two places to study. In the library you can find books easily and concentrate on your own studies, while in the research studio you can discuss with your partners.

原句语序混乱，词汇使用不当：“Indefinitely”用错，应为"Definitely"或"Indeed"。"please"应为"places"。句子应拆分为两句以表达不同地点的功能。"very concentrate"不正确，改为"concentrate"或"focus"。"doing this research studio"也不通顺，应改为"in the research studio you can discuss with your partners"。

× You can have a discuss with your partner.

✓ You can have a discussion with your partner.

“have a discuss”是动词和名词混用错误，正确名词形式是"discussion"。此外根据语境也可使用复数"partners"以表示与多位同伴讨论。

× Uh, yes I do, especially the library.

✓ Uh, yes I do, especially the library.

句子本身无明显语法错误，但上下文可改为更自然的完整句子如"Yes, especially the library." 此处保持原句可视为口语回答。

× You know, nowadays our school are enrolling more and more students, but the libraries didn't change a lot.

✓ You know, nowadays our school is enrolling more and more students, but the library hasn't changed much.

主谓一致："our school"为单数，应使用"is enrolling"而非"are enrolling"。第二个分句时态与表达也需调整："the libraries didn't change a lot"应改为现在完成时或现在时被动态，较自然为"the library hasn't changed much"（学校的图书馆变化不大）。"a lot"在正式表达中可用"much"代替。

× So I would appreciate if my school can expand the library with more States and more fast Wi-Fi.

✓ So I would appreciate it if my school could expand the library with more seats and faster Wi-Fi.

量词和词汇错误："States"应为"seats"（座位）。"more fast Wi-Fi"语法错误，应为比较级"faster Wi-Fi"。条件句中礼貌表达常用虚拟语气，改为"would appreciate it if my school could..."。

× In the near future I plan to do a master degree abroad and gain some international experience, and if I have opportunity I plan to go for PhD because I'm really interested in doing research.

✓ In the near future I plan to do a master's degree abroad and gain some international experience, and if I have the opportunity I plan to pursue a PhD because I'm really interested in doing research.

冠词和名词形式错误："master degree"应为所有格形式"master's degree"。"have opportunity"缺少冠词，改为"have the opportunity"。"go for PhD"更自然为"pursue a PhD"或"do a PhD"。